[Denied] Application Form For Lotc

[Andustar 4143]

Out of Character information.
 
What is your Minecraft account name: rowangl31
How old are you: 13
Are you aware the server is PG-13: Yes
Have you applied to this server before?: No
Have you read and agreed to the rules: Yes
What's the rule you agree with the most: No cyber bullying
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don't make any sense?: No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft: My friend told me about it
 
 
Definitions.
 
What is roleplaying: Pretending to be someone you are not e.g. dungeons and dragons.
What is metagaming: Using your own choices to affect the games lore and history.
What is powergaming Interacting with games like roleplaying games or board games.
 
In-Character information.
 
Characters name: Edward.
Characters gender: Male.
Characters race: Human.
Characters age: 19
 
Biography: Edward was raised on farm with a loving father and mother. His father, Henry, was a ex ranger of Oren and a former member of the Decterum while his mother, Elizabeth, was a local good wife and helped woman from the local village with childbirth. Edward's father began to teach him how to use a bow and handle a sword while his mother taught him about herbs and medicines you can find out in the wild from the age of 6. When the realm of Athera was discovered Edward's family bought a farm in the new realm, Edward was 18 at this point and often helped his father out with the farm but his still practised his skill with bow and sword whenever he could. However, with the recent return of the undead, their farm was raided and Edward's parents were killed, Edward was away Hunting at the time and by the time he got back it was too late. That night, he buried what remained of his parents and swore on their graves he'd avenge them!
Now, on his own, Edward travels toward the Oren capital  to follow in his fathers foot steps and become a ranger in service of Oren and fight the Undead back into the nether. However, although he wants to be a warrior his true destiny is only unfolding to him now as there is more to his life than meets the eye.
 
Personality traits: Courageous, brave, sometimes jolly, loyal and can be quite quiet most of the time.
Ambitions: Avenge His parents and become a brave ranger in service of the kingdom of Oren.
Strengths/Talents: Is strong with a bow and good with a sword, he is quick, nimble and silent.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Finds it harder to defend at close quarters and isn't very strong.
Appearance: Edward has white shaded skin, has brown eyes and brown hair. He is about 5ft tall and weighs 100 pounds.
Appearance, skin screenshot: I'm sorry I couldn't get a screen shot onto this email for some reason, I will give a description instead. On my characters skin he has, a green tunic with the Oren symbol on it, he has a grey cloak and hood with a arrow quiver on his back. He wears black trousers and has cream boots with two dagger sheaths on his sides. 

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• All your definitions need expansion. 
• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect. Remember not to plagiarize when looking at the wiki or other applications.  
• If your character worked in service to Oren, how is he weak?
• Expand upon your characters weaknesses.
• You need to have your characters screenshot in the application, I would recommend using www.imgur.com. Upload the image and the forums link. 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

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