[Denied] Lord Of The Craft Application 2

[Amazing Llama 0]

Hello, This is my second Application

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: THE_D0CT0R_101

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Powergaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for RP servers

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Roleplaying is when you play the role of your character and make your own story with people who join

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when there is a fight or event in one town and the person witnessing it tells there friend over social media but they are not allowed to join in if they were in a different town.

What is power gaming?: Powergaming is when somebody's character/move is to OP for the role-play and that make themselves look like they're really powerful

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Glandias Silverleaf

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Wood Elf

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): I was born and raised in Cerulin, nothing really interesting happened when I was young because my parents would always protect me except for that dreadful day when my parents were poisoned by an assassin when I was five, their last words were "find a boy named Saito Ayakashi, he will help you" then they were gone just like that. Then those people came, to take me away, they put me in a home with lots of other kid who lost their parents as well, I made a lot of friends but they soon got taken away by other people who where then named their parents, one day when I was 15 Elf years I was taken into a family with the last name Calvenberg, when I moved in I met a boy who lived near me named Saito then I remembered what my parents said, so I made friends with him and years later we set out into the world and started our journey.

Personality Traits: Kind, Caring, Nice to most people, Gets annoyed pretty easily, Lonely, Mentally Scared 

Ambitions: To try learn magic, To have lots of friends

Strengths/Talents: Good at making friends

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not strong, Weak

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Short, Skinny, Black hair, Weighs 45 kg (Really Light)

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

file:///Users/swolff/Desktop/2015-06-07_11.27.59.png

 

Thank you for reading, if you accepted me i would be very grateful.

[Overland 349]

Unfortunately your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made.

• Please expand on your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions, as they are incorrect.
• Please add more lore to your biography. Lore can be found on the wiki (http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/) Calvenberg also isn't a real town on the server.
• Having your character's parents assassinated for no reason is cliche.
• Please expand on your strengths and weaknesses.
• While a minor error, 45 kilograms is rather underweight.
• This guide shows you how to obtain your skin screenshot.

[Overland 349]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.