[Denied] Xxenderking's Whitelist Application 3 (God Please Help Me On This One)

[Papa Rock 2400]

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: XxEnderking

 

How old are you?: 15

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I do.

 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Never .

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have.

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying is strictly prohibited, and will not be condoned in any shape or form. If you promote, or take part in cyber bullying amongst the community, you will be punished just as severely.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No not really.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?  Well I was searching for mmorpg servers and i got a video then found out about this website and read it for a bit, few hours later i signed up and mape this application.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying? taking action in a role.. 

 

What is metagaming? when one is telling people stuff about role playing that is not happening in roleplay

 

What is powergaming?: A person who learns the game he plays inside and out to become the best at the game..

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Galdor  (this is an actual Elven name..

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Elf (Dark Elf)

Character’s age: 51 Years Old

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):   Galdor Was boy with a dream, A dream to become the best Archer in the word. His dad always told him to practice Close combat, But Galdor Already good with sword. His mother was a wood elf but his father was dark elf that only believed in the talent of people not who they really are. Galdor's mother loved him so much, she helped him train archery every day, 2 years later Galdor was old enough to protect the village he would scout the whole area 2 to 3 times a day. He was just a normal 15 year old Dark elf, his mother was coming to an end and about to pass way.

            Before she passed away, She gave Galdor A necklace with a Purple gem in it, Her last words were "Galdor never give up on your dreams and never let any body let you down..".Galdor was crying for ages, when his dad came he blamed Galdor for the death of his wife and slapped him hard scaring his eye and sent him to his room. Galdor put his stuff in to a leather pouch, took his bow and wore the necklace his mother gave him and he jumped out the window and ran away. He kept running and didn't stop, Galdor could never forgive his father for what he has done, Galdor traveled to Kal'Urguan Where the dwarves lived, Galdor made friends there and trained there with the dwarves and he noticed that when he really needed it, the gem would glow and he would run 2 times faster that normal.

 

Personality Traits: Intelligent, Strong, Unforgiving, Loyal, Brave, Respectful, Friendly, Faithful.

 

Ambitions: To find a real home and some day forgive his father.

 

Strengths/Talents: Hunting,Close combat/,mining,Breeding.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Being ambushed/Wood cutting, Farming.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 

Head: No hair

Skin color: Black

Eye Color: Purple (other eyes is a light purple)

Hight: 6 feet

weight: 140 pounds  

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://gyazo.com/4700229d950623946aa908722c824659

 

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

This application has been

Reasons:

• Biography is hard to follow and lacks sufficient lore.
• The necklace is not allowed, since of it being used to obviously make your character /unique/ and emphasize on some sort of reality that your character is a special snowflake. He is not.
• Strengths and weaknesses need to be expanded upon
• Please read up on the Elven lore and growth cycles. As they are not fully mature by 15, unless your village sends children to scout?
• Please link your previous applications in the question provided. Do not lie and say "never"
• Definitions need to be expanded

Please fix these problems and re-apply after the 24 hour denial period. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.