[Denied] Application

[NightMare07 0]

Out-of-Character Information

 

What's your Minecraft account name?: Logan505050

 

How old are you?: 13

 

Are you aware this is a PG-13 server?: Yes, I am

 

Have you applied to this server before?: No, this is my first time

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have

 

What's the rule you agree with most?: The rule stating that there is no meta/powergaming allowed

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you?: No, they all seemed very clear to me

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was searching roleplay servers on YouTube and found it.

 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Where you use a, usually fictional, character and act out his/her actions

 

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is a method used to surpass the boundaries of a game

 

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is a method of maximizing your roleplay character unfairly

 

In-Character Information

 

Character's name: Keris White

 

Character's gender: Male

 

Character's race: Human

 

Character's age: 37 presently

 

Biography: When Keris still a young lad, 8 to be exact, he always wanted to be an excellent swordsman. John White, his father, always helped train young Keris, for John was a swordsman himself. John also practiced in the arts of Alchemy. One day, however, a potion went wrong and John was killed. Keris and his mother Mary, mourned for him for 2 weeks before they began to recover.

 

Ever since Keris has trained even harder to reach his goal and become just like what his father was, a master swordsman.

 

Personality Traits: Kind, a bit short-tempered, serious usually, merciless in battle

 

Ambitions: To become like his father and to learn a bit of Arcane Magic

 

Strengths/talents: Skilled with a sword, considered faster than most

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: A little sloppy in combat, Cocky

 

Appearance: About 6 feet tall; bushy eyebrows, mustache, and beard; has leather/iron armor (in the skin not the item); a small ponytail on the back of my head; about 180 pounds; and hair going down to my neck

 

Screenshot: (couldn't paste it cause my computer stinks but here is the link) http://i58.tinypic.com/2u73zpc.jpg

 

 

 

 

 

 

[mitto 2312]

 

Your powergaming and metagaming definitions need expanding, they're too vague to gauge if you really know what they mean. Check this post for the definitions guide: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/126196-new-player-guide/?p=1213514

 

Your biography is too short, please make it /at least/ a decent two paragraph biography.

 

Include lore, this is a big one. We have a dedicated wiki: 

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Athera

 

Being skilled with a sword but being sloppy in combat makes no sense to me.

 

The link to your skin doesn't work.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 hours.

[mitto 2312]

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