[Denied] 0*=-O-=*0 Dwyyn The Dwarf 0*=-O-=*0

[pokantu 48]

Out-Of-Character Information

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:pokantu1
How old are you?:10
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): yes :https://www.lordofth...n/#entry1255333 and https://www.lordofth...n/#entry1256265 and https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/131623-pending-0-o-0-dwyyn-the-dwarf-0-o-0-edited-a-bit/#entry1258748
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes I read and agree them
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:



 

The use of fast travel during or for combat/raids/war is strictly prohibited.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was looking at youtube videos and found it

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: playing a role.
What is metagaming?: useing ooc knowledge in Role Play thoughts, action or behavior.
What is powergaming?:it is like "BoB stabs John" no chance the rp against it and nothing like drawing you weapon it must be like *BoB draws his weapon* than *BoB attempts to stab John* than blah blah the storie continues

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Dwyyn Rummovoarn
Character’s gender: male
Character’s race: dwarf
Character’s age: 16
Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Dwyyn was born in Khal'Akash. Dwyyn's father was a poor noble man so their family is royal but poor. they come from the "Rummovoarn" (guild) family mabe unknown but will populate... his father was a smith and his mother died when Dwyyn was 3 years old. so his father teached his son his own proffesion. his dad was educated so he teached his son how to read and write. he was 15 and he started useing bow and arrows to protect his dad. he made his own bow and arrow set when he was 14 but used in 15. he was better than the other dwarves in archery skill.

he started travelling when he was 15. he leaved his home land and wanted to help his own race. mabe will return to his home but no one knows. he wanted an army a castle! he worked hard and catched a horse and crafted a set of bow and arrows. one day when he was travelling he saw an orc near oren and shooted him in the head, he didnt see the other orcs other orcs ran after him they made him drop his bow and arrow set some how! he ran away from the orcs. the horse died on the way it died cause lack of water. he walked the other way. when he was 16 and he was travelling in the lands of oren , a dwarve soldier was shouting behind him. the soldier: "Dwyyn, weight, stop PLEASE!" Dwyyn said: "what happened?"*soldier sights* "err... it is hard to say this to you." "what happened, WHAT?!" Dwyyn ask's. "your,err... your father is dead" the soldier says. şyour father died in the siege of sanjezal *Dwyyn starts crying*. and the adventure of Dwyyn starts.

Personality Traits:smart thinker, good leader, good with relatioships, realy serious, calm.
Ambitions: getting more money, an army and a castle
Strengths/Talent: good smith, useing bow and arrows
Weaknesses/Inabilities:healing wounds,n using sword and axes
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): normal dwarf height, not fat but muscled weight: normal weight ( muscles included) brown hair and face hair. dosont have so much beard.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you ne d help, see our screenshot guidehere):http://imgur.com/M39dVdt

Edited August 8, 2015 by pokantu

[Fireheart 2777]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

Please link all your past application(s) where it asks you in the format if you have applied before.

 

Your definition of Roleplay is vague, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, to wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and/or fix your application based off the information and request above. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make all requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.