[Denied] Summorox's Application

[Summorox 55]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: jorgeboss...I know the name sounds immature but keep in mind I named it when i was 12 years old :P

How old are you?:I am 15 years old

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes, I am aware of that.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No, it's my first time applying for this server.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:While a bit confusing at first, I understood them after re-reading them.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:I'd say i agree most with the rule of not creating an alt. character in benefit of the main through roleplay.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):This isn't exactly a question about a rule, but more like asking for a suggestion. See, while i am decent at roleplaying, i have trouble approaching a person to roleplay with because i don't know what to initially say.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was looking at minecraft-serverlist.com when your server appeared. Since i'm a fan of rp servers, i immediately decided to apply for it.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Roleplaying is when you assume a role of another person created by the player, allowing unlimited possibilities.

What is metagaming?: metagaming is when you use information your character shouldn't know

ex:

me: hey Jack

Jack: how do you know my name???

What is powergaming?:powergaming is when you force another person to do something via rp

ex:

me:get in my car!

Steve:what? No!

me:*grabs steve and ties him to the car*

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:?Blade? (see biography)

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:?26? (see biography)

Biography: (from Blades POV) I don't remember most of my life...Sometimes when i dream i remember the scent of a farm, the metallic taste of blood from the enemy ,the smell of a homemade meal and the glorious feeling of using a bow.. But i will never forget the events that made me into this aberration! I remember my desperation when faced with an incurable disease,the relief when offered a cure by a mage and the shock of finding out that the mage was in fact, a dark mage  after drinking it. When i woke up tied in a stone bed, I felt different...I didn't know what it was until the mage  started torturing me to see if his experiment was sucessful. I remember the agonizing feeling of my limb being torn out and the shock of seeing it grow back in a minute. After serveral months of torture, i managed to escape by cutting my legs off and crawling off the stone table. Looking back, it probably wasn´t the brightest idead, but my state of mind was pretty bad.I spent half an hour regenerating hidden in a chamber where the mage throws his failed experiments. In that room was a dusty old mirror and when i looked at my reflection i saw a monster (read description) and i entered a state of blind rage...When i calmed down i saw the gruesome sight of the mage that i beat to death with one of my cut limbs. That sight made me realize  that it also screwed my mind. But there were still traces of a man still capable of doing good. Since then, I struggled with my morality but never gave up in changing into a better person and,perhaps someday, a hero...A hero with the name "Blade"

(formal biography and  events that happened after the escape)

I hope you liked the "origin story". I took some inspiration from my favorite superhero "deadpool" and i hope you don't mind that since it's also very different.Now,to the important stuff :)

You may notice the signs in "age" and "name". It means that "Blade" is the name he chose for himself after the incident and his age is simply a presumption from the doctors since he doesn't know his past before the incident.

The story on the server happens six years after the incident:

On the first two, an anguished "Blade" desperately seeks a cure and after failing to find one tries to kill himself multiple times,failing everytime.

On the third year, Blade comes to terms with his state and merges both sides of his mind: The insane one and the "good " one

On the fourth year a hermit teaches him the art of dual wielding in a fight, with Blade quickly becoming skilled in using two katana-like swords

The fifth and sixth years Blade is a mercenary and a bounty hunter, quickly becoming well-known(or so would Blade say :P)

likes: Mocking "evil" guys, annoying friends, fighting , food, money, kind acts,hurting himself when bored.

dislikes:his state,cruelty against innocents,boredom,big hats,sheep,people that mock his condition and those that use their sad story as an excuse to act broody/cold against others.

So, basically Blade is a mercenary who tries to be a good guy while not taking  things TOO seriously because of his regeneration.

 

 

 

Personality Traits:Bloodthirsty against enemies,nonchalant,humorous,slightly insane

Ambitions:Find a cure for his condition and become a hero

Strengths/Talents: Advanced regeneration(not immortal, can be killed by disintegration,lava and can be buried, sealed),skilled dual swordsman,proficient with dagger throwing and archery, heightened reflexes and senses, immune to mind affecting spells because his mind is too distorted,

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Struggle  of his morality,can be easily coerced into serving someone with a promise of a cure, not the brightest mind :P ,Doing spells is very difficult for him to do,but with a lot of hard work it's possible and his ugliness.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):grayish skin,scarred body,bald,maske covering eyes and nose,two katana-like swords and a bow on his back, a dagger in each of his sides,black gloves,grey/black suit,uses bandana to cover mouth,a black bracelet on each arm, 5 feet 7 inches,white pupilless eyes

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[img]imgur.com/yVpoNx8[/img]

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[mitto 2312]

Your application has been [DENIED] this is because there were too many problems with this application, or just one or two big problems that I could not look past. Do not be scared however, you can still apply again, just hopefully after you have made the changes I have laid out.

 

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Albeit a length piece, I cannot review it because of the level of literacy displayed. In order to make an acceptable application, please make sure your grammar and spelling is to the highest standard possible. Use fully sentences and paragraphing etc. If you cannot provide an acceptable reading application I cannot see how you would be able to roleplay properly on Lord of the Craft.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 hours from the time of this denial.

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.