[✔] [Accepted] My Very Very New Application

[Jentos 9425]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Jentos
How old are you?: 14
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes I do
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no trolling I've been trolled in other servers
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): they all make good sence to me
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found it on a server list and I love lord of the rings
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Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: acting like if I were really in a different world and being as most realistic as possible
What is metagaming?: using information your character doesn't know
What is powergaming?: if I did a successful action to another player without letting him do his own action until his action is finished which makes it more rp ex: demon hacks knight/knight fights back/demon decapitates knight!. this is made so the two players have time to do their action each at a time so it doesn't go crazy, out of control and make it more fair for each of them

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Jentos Adam
Character’s gender: man
Character’s race:Human Cherkassian
Character’s age: 39
Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Jentos! A prided Cherckassian with the love of battle and glory! He lived amongst them, learning about the code of honor, to the strict rules of his kin! 
While challenges and tasks he demanded the aid of the goddess of storm and rivers to come to his aid!
But with the terrible and murderous religion war which destroyed his people's homes he tried In vain to help them. With no luck... He abandoned his own family to search for a new destiny. He explored the lands on his faithful horse Isembert looking for a new life! which would not contain any religious massacre. He knew inside him, that he was "wild" all the cherckassians did! while training to sword-fight (which is his favorite activity!) If he was too taunted he would become as demonic as a starving wolf! And the only way to stop him was to lock him up for about 40 min. until it lost effect! That meant that he was a Berserk! The message was clear. don't abuse me!
The Cherckassians called what produced his rage "the beast inside his heart" Jentos never knew what was the cause of such a rage but he thought it could make him a known fighter! Even if he was very slim and wasn't the most muscular man! He still hoped to be known (he's 7,5 feet tall!) Gents always wanted to fight! His father told him about his ancestors fighting at the Trench battle of the Crossroads and that himself had seen as a young child many battles against men and elves! His ancestors came to the Cherckassians after having been rejected by the The king Andrik Vydra a few days after he was crowned king, since he had a certain hatred for his peaceful family!

 

 Gents traveled so far he even reached the capital of the elves, Luminaire! Even for his hatred for the elves he had to admit even just seeing it from a distance it was very beautiful! But he wished to learn more about the art of war since he had trained for those years! So he decided to venge an old wound in the family!!! He decided to join the siege of the Oren men against the elves! It was a merciless combat in which Jentos turned into his Beserk rage which costed the lives not only of the elves but also the Oren! After the siege (and of nearly having been killed for treason since he killed Oren during his rage) he decided to leave this sad story behind. So he decided to attempt to join the Order Of The White Rose in there imperial conquest but was rapidly kicked out of the inscription room! The only choice left to Jentos was to become had a merciless thief! Unfortunately after having been caught stealing and apples near the castle of King Olivier De Savoie not to mention having to dodge 23 arrows, 3 pikes, 5 tomatoes and a shovel thrown by an angry farmer. He took the resolution of getting back home and regain his long gone honour! While he came back back home he finally realized that how matter he tried hard to get rid of his Destiny it always finishes by coming back to you

Personality Traits: thinks fast but badly, has berserk rages which is contrast to the calm Cherkassians
Ambitions: he wants to honor his people and find a new home! While with his people Jentos cared a bit less about what happened in the rest of the world but still did learn about the first Empire in a few old books.


Strengths/Talents is a berserk, war cries and a love of blacksmithing and alchemy
Weaknesses/Inabilities: is scared of death, he hates losing, he is sentimental, his love of honor makes him more vulnerable, his numerous wounds do not help him.
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):He is very tall but very very slim about 90 pounds
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://minecraft.nov...42619392/jentos


this is the link to my skin from igmur: 
mKihAYo.png the title is: Jentos  I made it as simple as I could :) simply check for an image at the site at the name Jentos

[Fireheart 2777]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Please lengthen your Biography out to make it longer. I am looking for around the size of two well sized paragraphs. You can incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

 

Please provide a picture of your Character’s skin so I can review it.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

This application is accepted. On the behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a whitelisted player. Please wait as a GM will implement you to the server shortly! While you are waiting you are more than welcomed to browse the forums and/or Wiki to refresh your mind on server events and lore.

[Fireheart 2777]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum.

Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

[Pandan 1452]

Player Whitelisted.