[Denied] Snikfang

[Snikfang 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:thejaster
How old are you?:15
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no metagaming
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):none
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?friends
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
What is roleplaying?:acting out a role in a story 
What is metagaming?:when you use OOC
Knowledge to your character advantage 
What is powergaming?:doing any thing to buff your character even sacrificing role playing
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
Character’s name:Snikfang
Character’s sex:Male
Character’s race:Ogre
Character’s age:22
Biography: My name is Snikfang my brother is Jhoqa our clan was gorkil I was fighting for my life against a poisonous Scorpion and we had to kill it or we got discarded after this harsh task we went out on a hunt looking for mutton and we got lost in the woods we start searching for our clan and we found some outlanders and we were going to Attack and the elf used his arrows and knocked us Unconscious and we started traveling with these outsiders
Personality Traits:tall,hairy,not the smartest
Ambitions:to fight the good fight
Strengths/Talents:I can lift three logs on one hand
Weaknesses/Inabilities:I don't now math or English 
Appearance: I am 9ft9in talk and I am very strong and I am green and hairy and try to be smart
Appearance:http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/4165582/orc-warrior-improvement/

 

[tilly 5115]

Hello, applicant. You've been denied for the following reasons:

• You have plagiarized/copied word-for-word the definitions of roleplaying/metagaming/powergaming! This is your first warning.

• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the giant worm attack in Athera!) - check out the wiki if you need to.

• Please improve the quality of your application because I do not feel you understand what is required in order to role-play on this server!

 

You may reapply in twenty four hours.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.