[Denied] My Application Form

[MarsP51 0]

 

 

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:
MarsP51

How old are you?:

12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Yes and i will be as Mature as i can 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:

Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:
I agree that any Characters can not Come from a royalty ,I agree because of the reason that it would be unfair to other players 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

NO

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

 Through my passion to Roleplay i wanted to play and/or find the best Roleplay server there could be so i searched "ALOT" and i found this server on Mine Statues

Which i think would be 'The Server' i was looking for.

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: RolePlay is when you are In a game but Pretending to be in real life, so the game would be  more interesting and You would be able to have a "real life game"

What is metagaming?: Meta Gaming is an OOC thing in role play (Out Of Character) so when you do it Your character is not aware of doing that or more like not actually doing it ,but you are.

What is powergaming. Power gaming is that you exclude Roleplay or the story for the aim that you want to progress more which shouldn't be done 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Michael Herbart

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 17

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Michael was born in 27/8/1998 .He lived in farm close to the desert but still quite far. From when Michael was born he loved studying new stuff and he always tried to make items but he always failed until he was 12 he created his first item which was a glass bottle his Mom and Dad didn't encourage him but instead they always told him that it isn't useful what he made, but they still stood with him and taught him a lot of stuff and when he was 13 they but him in a school that Taught him a lot and that's when he learned how to fight ,play sports, handle a bow and look at every technology differently.

 

On his 14 birthday he had first Party but unfortunately his dad died with a heart attack and after a while his mom got a bad disease and died from it , Since then all his friends stayed away from him as they thought he was bad luck and who ever doesn't go away tries and fight him, even if  Michael was

  friendly he will stands against anyone that threatens him or talks bad about family and thats why he always stands back but after that  he took everything he can,a fishing rod,then he made a boat and he sailed. One  thing he didn't learn was how to swim and in the middle of his adventure the ship sank but fortunately some unknown person saved him  on his ship but when Michael woke up he didn't find anyone. For a few years Michael was sailing and he found land but on the land he got knocked out and when he woke up his adventure started...

 

 

Personality Traits:.Smart ,Knows what to do, Friendly. Shy

Ambitions:Make something that heals diseases and try and make friends.even if  Michael was

Strengths/Talents:Making items, physically and mentally strong , good using 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: socialite ,cooking, swimming, Using any weapons

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):Michael  has an Afro Dark Brown Hair Weights 72 KG and he is 1.76 Meters

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://postimg.org/image/z3jsuwtbt/

[Harri 4815]

 

Unfortunately, you’ve been denied.

The following reasons behind this are as follows:

• Your definitions are rather messy and hard to follow. Try clear them up a bit and develop them some more next time.
• You seem to have the idea that this is set in modern day times - when LoTC is actually set in a Medieval setting. So, things like schools, sports, technology and the likes wouldn't exist here. You also haven't looked or touched upon any of our lore on the WIki at all. I recommend reading over it and such, as you won't get in without doing so. 
• Your bio is very all over the place and seems rather random, or very cliche. Try to make it flow better, and be a bit more original - tell me who your character really is!
• You must be at least 18 on your first character. Make sure to change that next time.
• Your skin isn't suitable for the setting of the server. Find one that fits a medieval theme.
   

If you’d like any help doing your application once more, feel free to contact me. I’ll happily try and lend my assistance.

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

[Harri 4815]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.