[Denied] Codus7's aplication v.4

[Codus7 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: codus7

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no cyber bulling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was browsing the web for a good rpg minecraft server and found, this one( im a big fan of lotr so this is just awesome)

roleplay: when a player acts as a character they have created

metagaming: when a player uses information their character doesn't know but they do

powergaming: a type of role playing where doesn't give other player the ability to choose what happens

Character’s name: Codus

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Adunian

Character’s age: 37

Biography : I don't know where I was born or spent the first years of my life, for as long as I could remember my family was always moving. I din't have friends because of this so I made some up.( their names are  Hono Mizu Kaze and Ken)Still to this day I talk with them about my life, and ask for their advice when in need, well back to my family. My parents where very loving and kind, my father taught me how to wield a blade, and my mother made the best food. My parents told me that we were direct descendants of Horen and if I ever met any other andunians to make them friends and comrades. Back then I couldn't tell, but they were very cautious, my father had his dagger with him always, that dagger is one of my last memorabilia left from him. On day when I was about 15, I woke up and the walls were covered in blood, my parents bodies lie motionless in a dark crimson puddle, without their heads. The entire house had been ransacked( even though it was only two rooms, a kitchen and bedroom) and only the elvish dagger that lied in my fathers hands remained. Oh I have forgotten to mention that before my father settled down he was an adventurer, he traveled the lands and fought fearsome creatures whith his blade  Thryne. his adventure came to an end when Thryne was knocked from his hand and fell into a great chasm. After my parents died I worked for about a year, and then went of on an adventure, to find out what happened to my parents and to find Thryne up till now iv'e had no luck with either of these, but my swordplay skills have sharpened amd I have picked up valuable skills, and have learned a small bit of magic too.

Personality Traits: very conservative, and doesn't let strangers know that much about him, values trust very much and is very trustworthy himself

Ambitions: He travels the world searching for his fathers blade and to find his parents murderer/s Wants to make plenty of friends and comrades

Strengths/Talents: he is a fast runner, he is not too shabby with a blade,  know basic fire water and wind magic, hard to detect( sneaky)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: has a very sensitive spot below his left knee cap and if he is just kicked there he feels immense pain and is immobile for a short time. bad social skills.  doesn't usually wear heavy armor because it slows him down

Appearance: he is 6'1" and weighs 170 pounds he isn't too muscular, but not just skin and bones either.short blond hair and green-ish blue eyes

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin

 

[Fireheart 2777]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

I am overall hesitant to deny an application like this, but after reviewing it I can see there is a bit of work to be done before this application can be accepted. I will treat the main sections of the application as I would if I were to place it on pending. This way you can make your edits and re-apply with a sufficient application next time around.

 

Your definition of Roleplay is vague, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is vague, please expand on it by referring to this link here for guidance.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

 

Your character can not have any form of training or understanding of basic concepts of magic. Your character must learn that once you are whitelisted on the server!

 

Please fill in your Personality Traits with more context.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

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