[Denied] acekitzo Application

[Arkin 0]

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: acekitzo

How old are you?:19

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no griefing

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? i have 2 brothers on your server, and I'm into roll-playing

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: the act of filling or acting out a role of a noun (character).

What is metagaming?: any action or knowledge a person has that there noun (character).

What is powergaming?: there are  several types of power gamers (minmaxer, rules lawyer, twink, tweak, a cheat and a munchkin) minmaxer: tries to squeeze as much efficiency as possible out of a system. rules lawyer: "just that" twink: someone who abuses the rules in letter or spirit. tweak: is simply to make legal, reasonable alterations to improve a character's effectiveness. a cheat: moder, cheater, ect. and a munchkin: is a immature player trying to become grater but unconventional methods

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Wailin stone helm

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: dwarf

Character’s age: 119

Personality Traits: quiet keeps to himself, "a man's business is his own." but he will still keep close to people and others for company. likes mining alone for long periods of time,

Ambitions: he always wanted to build his own house of wood and stone in the woods were he can live out his days in peace with fresh air and the feel of sun light.

Strengths/Talents: digging, shooting a bow, eating, drinking, and fighting with an axe.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: can't stand cats, "I i will not go near those... those devils, i keep my safe distance out of reach. and one eye on it at all times"

Appearance: gruff weathered face covered in dirt, with saw dust fills his beard. short 3.5 dark hared of bronze, dwarf with eyes of fiery brass

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Wailin was born on a high winters moon. back when he was a young  boy growing up in the high  lands of Kal'Urguan. He and his father, Yur stone helm went deep cavern mining for a rare form of iron that was always in the worst places. This iron we called red iron it was harder and more conductive then iron but harder to find. They only ever found maybe 60 lbs of it ever, but that didn't stop them so he and Yur went mining for weeks at a time. living on bread,  salted beef and water. they did this for many years Wailin was Yur's only child, and that Yur lost his wife Kennis in an ork raid when Wailin was still just a babe. Wailin never really know her and when he would ask Yur he would only get a reply of "some day lad ill tell ya of your mum some day, that isn't today." so Wailin thought it may be best if he just wait for that day, for fear of his father never telling him.

his father was a skilled hunter as well as a woodsmen Wailin learned all that he knows from his father.

When Wailin was old enough to take a woman for a wife, he and his father fleet like they only were going out for the early morning to go mining. and that Wailin thought he had found a red iron ore vain by were they were mining the night before, and that he would need help with mining it. After they would go to the pub and look for a girl. but wailin was looking more to the ail then a girl. so before dawn the two when out to get the red ore. they were deep in the mine when they found the most ore they had ever Sean well over 200lbs. so they didn't wast any time mining the red ore, when they had all the ore they could carry they headed back down the path of the cavern. Wailin was a good 12 feet in fruit or Yur when ever Wailin would look back he would see his dads torch and a big smile on his face that he had never Sean before when his father was only 3 feet behind Wailin he said "to day i tell yeah of your mother, that her name was Kennis" which meant beautiful. and that she was a shop owner in the grate mountain city of Kal'Urguan and that she from the snow lands. Then he said he had a sister named Amber. and that i should find her, but when he told Wailin this he didn't know what to say. When all took a turn for the worse as they neared the end of there tunnel Wailin wasn't fast enough to grab his father as he feel thousands of feet to the darkness. he never to See him again, wailin spent the whole winter alone in there small house in the mountains. then spring came and summer, when a passing traveler was looking to see if anyone had lived in the house anymore. he saw only a dwarf curled up by the fire. just crying in silence. So he took him back the the city to get some good food and ail. (This is were he would enter the city looking for food and housing)

 

 

Edited October 31, 2015 by Arkin
were is the skin i put? http://s3.amazonaws.com/static.planetminecraft.com/files/resource_media/skin/1149/DwarfWarrior.png?response-content-disposition=attachment;%20filename=DwarfWarrior.png&AWSAccessKeyId=AKIAID7XSQOHMJCZOS2A&Expires=1446270195&Signatur

[James 425]

Your application is

You are not allowed to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Your metagaming definition is wrong, and your powergaming definition does not meet the servers definition. I would recommend looking at already accepted applications, but remember not to plagairize. 
• Weaknesses need to be expanded upon
• Use imgur to upload your skin and post it on the app

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

Note: Very well written biography. 

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.