[Denied] [Pending] Chucklechuckle's Whitelist Application (edited)

[Chucklechuckle 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Chucklechuckle

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No harassment

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was told about it
 

Definitions
What is roleplaying?:
To change a person’s behavior to play a role

What is metagaming?: Where the person makes use of the knowledge that the character shouldn't no

What is powergaming?: Making yourself unhittable in a rp fight

 

In-Character Information
Character’s name: Anya Aelisinan
Character’s sex: Female
Character’s race: High Elf
Character’s age: 55
Biography: Anya was born in a time of crisis. A day before she was born, her sister had fled the Silver City of Haelun ’or. Unfortunately, Anya had never met her sister or mother, since she died in labor, and her father never spoke of them. Only occasionally, did her father talk of her mother, her kindness, generosity, but also her wildness. He never spoke of her sister. Not once. To them she was a disgrace to the family and to Haelun’or.

 

After a few months, the news of her sister’s disappearance was no longer spoken. Her father still mourned her mother, and because of that, she rarely was paid attention too. A few years later, her father felt like he could not live anymore. He traveled to the nearest tavern and ended up getting into a brawl with Orcs. News spread throughout the city and not a day past 30 did Anya receive the news. From that point on, she became lonely, looking for adventure and friends. But everyone in the city believed she was cursed or ‘bad luck’. Only then did she receive some tutoring and lessons from an older elf in the city. She then became interested in magic and sought out every opportunity to practice it. She studied Arcane magic and eventually became interested in Fire Evocation. She still had years and years to master it, but she knew it could wait. About a week after that, no one seemed to care when Anya Aelisinan went through the gates and into the world beyond.
Personality Traits: Kind, Mischievous, Optimistic, and Judgemental

Ambitions: To learn more about Arcane magic and her sister  

Strengths/Talents: Magic; Use of daggers
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Combat, mainly with a sword
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):
Anya is quite beautiful with her wavy, platinum hair, pale skin, and purple eyes. She stands at 5’11 and weighs 110 pounds. She normally wears her favorite red dress but carries a pouch with her items for magic.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your
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Edited November 15, 2015 by Chucklechuckle

[Lego XBOX 915]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 24 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for elves can be found on the Wiki here! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant event. Just a little more that is; it's great you added the High Elven capital -- adding the realm would also be good, and/or a large event.

Your character can not have any form of training or understanding of basic concepts of magic. Your character must learn that once you are whitelisted on the server! Please make the proper revisions so that they follow under the guidelines of the request. So please change the story/strengths accordingly.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

Applicant failed to make (all) requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

Also, please link or add your skin to the application.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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