[Denied] [Pending] IamCrazy13's Application

[IamCrazy13 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: IamCrazy13

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yup

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Friend

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Its a role you play in a game or real life.

What is metagaming?: Its information a character would not know normally in RP.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is using emotions that do not give the other person any time to react or respond.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Wynnter

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Wynnter is a happy and cheery elf, she has had quiet a bad upbringing due to her village being burnt down by a group of Orc's. After that it changed her, she has a split personality but she is mostly nice unless you get on her bad side then your in for it, She also has a stalking issue. Wynnter plans to get revenger on the group that killed everyone in her village, I have a feeling she will win her personal battle. Wynnter will always help someone in need because that is the person she is which I suppose is a good thing. Wynnter also has a brother and a sister but they went missing after the village incident, they are both older than her. 

Personality Traits: Happy, kind, split

Ambitions: To get revenge for her village

Strengths/Talents: Swift 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Seeing a friend get hurt.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Brown hair, 5'7, 7 and a half stone.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

[Lego XBOX 915]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 24 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for elves can be found on the Wiki here! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant event.

Just add the name of the world your character was born (has to be from LotC) and the town or mention something which happened on the server. Your 'village' and stuff is too vague.

 

Also, the village being destroyed by orcs is very cliche. Please change that part of your story -- and ambitions. Orcs and bandits don't just go destroying villages (but, if you can link it to a big battle that actually happened in the server then that is fine).

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

Applicant failed to make (all) requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

[Lego XBOX 915]

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