[Denied] [Pending] NoSpoonNeo's whitelist application

[Reeg_ 75]

OOC information

Minecraft account name:     Reeg

How old are you?     15

Are you aware the server is PG-13?      Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?     Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?   I think keeping characters strictly within the 

lore of the world makes for a really great story 

Are there any rules that confuse you or don’t make sense? “When you die in-game, 

you are forced to forget the roleplay leading up to said death. Acting on information 

during this “death-time” will be considered meta-gaming, and is severely punishable” 

It’s not quite clear how much exactly you should “forget”. 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was exploring the internet for Lord of 

the Rings servers and this seemed like the best one. 

Definitions

What is roleplaying? Roleplaying is having your character act as though they really 

lived in the fantasy world; ex. talking like that race/character would, having mannerisms 

that race/character would

What is metagaming? Metagaming is having your character know something that, if it was a real situation, they wouldn't be able to know. Ex. Preplanning roleplay with a friend on the phone 

What is powergaming? Powergaming is giving your character excessive power that they 

really wouldn’t in the real world. Ex. Doing something unrealistic during battle like 

roleplaying you roundhouse kicked an armed, armored soldier and knocked him 

unconscious without any sort of weapon 

In-Character Information

Name: Rosa Tegil 

Sex: Female 

Race: Heartlander human 

Age: 20 years 

Biography:

Rosa was born in 1509 to Astald and Fea Tegil. She was born in the great city of 

Petrus; capital of the Reformed Kingdom of Oren in the old realm of Athera. At the age 

of 4, she and her family moved to Vailor after the destruction of Athera by the giant earth 

worm. They settle in Felsen of the Holy Oren Empire. 

In 1518 Rosa was 9 years old. Her father Astald went to war against the rebel 

dwarf group “The Mountain Monarchy” and later “The Ducal Coalition .” He visited 

home off and on for 2 years. Astald was killed in the Battle of the Forest against the 

Ducal Coalition. Rosa was 11 years old by this time. 

Rosa lives with her mother, Fea, until the age of 17 (1526), helping her by 

working as an assistant for a blacksmith. That year, the Plague struck and Rosa and her 

mother fell very ill. Rosa survived, but unfortunately Fea does not. 

Rosa left Felsen and works around the Holy Oren Empire doing odd jobs such as 

music, delivering goods, and running errands. Now, in the year of 1529, she has decided 

to return to Felsen and become a blacksmith and/or a tinker. 

Personality traits: Curious, introverted, willing to learn 

Ambitions: Wants to become a blacksmith and later a tinker 

Strengths/talents: Creative, learns quickly 

Weaknesses/inabilities: Speaking to large groups of people 

Appearance: 5 ft 8 in, about 150 lbs 

Skin: (attached) 

Edited November 18, 2015 by NoSpoonNeo
improved application

[Pureimp10 5691]

 

Your application has been put on [PENDING]

 

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

 

 Your metagaming definition is incorrect, please correct it using the Definitions Guide found on this post:

Remember to write them out in your own words.

 

The dwarven rebellion was known as the "Mountain Monarchy", and the later rebellion would be the "Duke's War". You got the two mixed up in your biography.

 

To answer your question, a general rule of thumb is to forget about 30 minutes of roleplay leading up to the death.

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[Pureimp10 5691]

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

- Applicant failed to make the edits requested within the allotted 24 hours.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[Pureimp10 5691]

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