[Denied] Application

[Kawaii_Bacon 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Kawaii_Bacon

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Not talking back to the GM

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Searching for minecraft RP servers and finding a YouTube video

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Playing a role

What is metagaming?: Any strategy or method used in a game

What is powergaming?: Interacting with games

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Ryul

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Wood Elf

Character’s age: 30

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): When Ryul was young he was a slave, he was the one always being bullied and never having a chance to stand up for himself. When he was eight he managed to escape with nothing but the clothes he was wearing. When he got to the closest town, he managed to find a small family that took care of him for a while. When he was 20, his home was attacked by Daemons. He got away with little armor and a sword. Over the years he has found his way to find places to sleep. He taught himself to hunt and he had a profession of a hunter. He was once out hunting when he was ambushed. He tried to defend himself but couldn't, they took all of his armor and his weapons. To this day he has been a beggar, hoping for somebody to help him get revenge on those people.

Personality Traits: Charismatic, smart, doesn't talk much, loves to help others

Ambitions: Helping, hunting, revenge on the ambushers

Strengths/Talents: Hunting and persuading

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not helping others, killing innocents, 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 5'' 2' Weight: 150 lbs.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

[Keldrith 717]

DENIED

You have been denied for the following reasons, if you have any questions or if you need any help feel free to PM me! Please wait 24 hours before you reapply.

 

- Your roleplaying definition is not incorrect, but it's very vague. Please refer to this link for guidance, it might help you out with this one along with the others.

- Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions are incorrect, refer to the previous link for guidance on these ones too. And make sure you're more specific, try to add more detail. 

- Your biography has very little server lore, you will need to add to it (ex. Locations, historical events etc.) Please use this link, it might help as well. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor

- Your biography is a little on the short side, try adding some to it. ( Over the years he has found his way to find places to sleep. He taught himself to hunt and he had a profession of a hunter. He was once out hunting when he was ambushed.") Try adding more detail, you can add to each of these topics that you mentioned in the bio, simply by saying small details that don't take away from the point of the story, I can further elaborate on this if you want to shoot me a PM. 

[tilly 5115]

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