[Denied] [Pending] Me

[_xXx_Foxy_xXx_ 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Argonomn
How old are you?: 14
Are you aware the server is PG-13: Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: III. Behavior that disrupts the flow of roleplay without directly isolating or targeting another player, while not as consequential, shall still be dealt with accordingly with clear protocol from now on. Essentially anything that is considered a joke taken too far. 
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was searching to servers.
 
Definitions
What is roleplaying?: To act out a role of a specific period in time in history or in a book.
What is metagaming?: Making a decision on out-of-game information.
What is powergaming?: A style of gaming to obtain better progress of achieving a gole.
 
In-Character Information
Character’s name: Argonomn
Character’s sex: Male
Character’s race: Dark Elf 
Character’s age: 18
Biography: Argonomn was found in the Wood by an orc looking for a stray meal when he stumbled across him. Raised by Orcs, Argonomn grew up speaking the Orc language and listening about the time of the dragons.  All of the talk about dragons made him want to kill them.  At age thirteen, he killed a young dragon the same size as him named Kaloc.  This angered Narthog, Kaloc's father.  He began to set Argonomn's Clan. This started an unheard of war. His foster parents were killed in the war by a dragon near Redwood, and he was rejected by his Clan.  He had no family until a  mountain dwarf found him wandering the streets of Redwood. Goldor, the dwarf, took him in and turned the dark elf into a kinder dark elf. He then took on the art of smithing weapons. He became a master smith at fourteen and crafted weapons for dragon slaying and war that only the elven people could match.
Personality Traits: Very kind yet stubborn.
Ambitions: To fight alongside his companions.
Strengths/Talents: Good with advanced technology and equipment.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Socially awkward.
Appearance 6' 5"
105 lbs.

Edited November 22, 2015 by _xXx_Foxy_xXx_

[Imi 425]

Under review.

[Imi 425]

Pending:
-Your app has been put on pending for the following reasons:

-Your power-gaming definition is too vague. Try to edit it to make it more accurate.
-Your backstory is very cliche'd. Is it really likely a character could kill a dragon aged 10? Make some changes to your back story to make it more original.
-Your backstory contains no lore. Make sure it has at least three pieces of server lore, which can be found on the wiki.

-You have 24 hours to make these changes If you need any help, feel free to contact me!

[tilly 5115]

 

You may not apply within the 24 hour time frame between denials, yet you have done so four times today!

This has resulted in a two week ban from applying.

If you have any questions, please feel free to message me, or ask for help in the WS chat in game.

[tilly 5115]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.