[Denied] Ridril Ingram character application

[seelsa 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: seelsa

How old are you?: 15 years old

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I agree to follow the rules.

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: There are absolutely no GM refunds for items. If you die anywhere on the map, you will not get items refunded.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: Nope! There are no rules that I have seen that I am confused about.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A cousin of mine recommended the server.

 

 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: To take the role of a character other than yourself, and act as them.

 

What is metagaming?: To make actions / decisions based on information your RP character does not know.

 

What is powergaming?: To declare that an action you make against another RP'er is always successful, and to not give another player freedom to act against your action.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Ridril Ingram

 

Character’s sex: Male

 

Character’s race: Wood Elf (Mali’ahearal)

 

Character’s age: 39

 

Biography: Separated from their parents, Ridril and his older sister, Ilsayna, they ventured off to both adventure, and to find their family. The duo have had a slow start, from nothing. Ilsayna took shelter in another Elven city as Ridril went off to investigate a clue pertaining to their disappearance. They met up again once more and traveled near the Dwarven realms, and were pushed away. Finding themselves at a dead-end to their search, they wandered off again, as nomads traveling the lands.

 

Personality Traits: Quiet, Smart, but short-tempered

 

Ambitions: To find something never before discovered

 

Strengths/Talents: Impatient, Strong

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Alcohol,

 

Appearance: Height: 6’8”, About 137lbs

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin: I cannot seem to be able to upload or paste the picture here, but here's a link to the skin; http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/2693320/rory1441/

 

[Lego XBOX 915]

[Lego XBOX 915]

 

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

I have found this application to contain content that was copied from another application. I have discovered that the Metagaming, Powergaming and Roleplaying Definitions were plagiarized and thus I am labeling this application as a plagiarized application. We do not take lightly to un-original work and content, I will thus be leaving you off with a warning and will be instantly denying your application.

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for elves can be found on the Wiki ( http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Elves )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

Please lengthen your Biography out to a longer length. I am looking for around the size of two paragraphs. As an idea incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character’s development to their current standpoint.

The appearance you have described does not follow your racial guidelines. As 6'8" is quite tall for a wood elf.

Talking about wood elves, in elven they are Mali'ame. Mali'aheral are high elves! This would be a minor problem if only you hadn't also plagiarized it from the same application you plagiarized the definitions from.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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