[Denied]Evandil's application.

[Evandil 0]

Out Of Character

-Minecraft Account Name: Evandil7

-How old are you?: 17

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Mountain Time/United States

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I do have a good grip on the English language. I sometimes make spelling and grammer mistakes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a pretty smart and nice person. I enjoy playing video and computer games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I could play for a couple of hours on weekdays because of school, but on weekends I can be on longer

-How long have you played minecraft?: A couple of months.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I am fairly new to roleplaying. I do play D&D with my friends occasionaly.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be fun, hopefully with a community of nice players.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have never been on any other server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have read and agree to the rules. I have read the lore

-Name the 4 races on this server. Humans, Elves, Dwarves and Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?: A banner on someones signature.

-Did you vote?: Yes

-What was your favourite Law?: No greifing

-What was your least favourite Law?: None of them.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Evandil

In Character.

-Character Name: Soveliss Liadon

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Biography: Sovellis was born into a small fairly poor family in Serpent Ridge. His parents were Lithaldoren Liadon (father) and Aaliyah Liadon (mother). At the age of eight Soveliss was exiled from Serpent Ridge for a crime he did not commit. One day a man found him and taught him some basic survival skills, how to read and write, and basic knowledge to know on some of the cities. At the age of 16 Soveliss appealed to the leader of Serpent Ridge to be allowed back into the village. Two years later, Soveliss was welcomed back into the village, even though many did not want him to return. Ever since his return, Soveliss has been trying to become a great adventurer.

-Character Age: 18

-Character Appearance: Tall and of an average build with curly blond hair and blue eyes.

-Character Personality: He is a very carful person and when he meets new eople he is trys to not anger, insult them and provoke them. Soveliss does not enjoy fighting and if arrested will not attemt to resist.

-Your ambitions: Soveliss wishes to become a great adventurer. Later in his life he jst wishes to settle down in a small village.

-Can your character read or write?: My character can read and write.

-Can your character mine?: Yes

-Are you a capable builder?: No

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, but without any skill.

-Enjoy Farming?: Not really.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Soveliss is quite adept with a bow.

-A screenshot of your skin: provided in the attached file.

[yugimon8 1]

Your so going to be deined. you need to put ALOT more thought into it. exspecaly the bio it needs to be longer.

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/

[yugimon8 1]

His skin look rp to me.

[Neri 3590]

His skin look rp to me.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

He doesnt mean all those problems are present. It's just a list of common problems.

Standard fixing needed here, fix your bold tags, put more description into your Bio and Skills sections.

Keep the bolding consistent. One part looked good then the next was completely bolded. Looked kinda weird in my opinion.

[yugimon8 1]

Don't get disaponted though it toke me 4 trys.