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[Vexanis 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: the_rude_wolf

 

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyberbullying

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend told me about it his name is xxusagigxx, i used to play in an RP server in WoW so this seemed like it would be good fun.

 

 

Definitions 

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is the act of adopting your avatars personality and attributes in game and acting them out

 

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you break the rules to progress your character, it often involves exterior sources

 

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when you play a game with the focus purely one winning sacrificing any story for that sole purpose

 

 

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:  Vexanis 

 

Character’s sex: Male

 

Character’s race: Adunian ( Half Elf)

 

Character’s age: 20

 

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): A half breed between an exiled minor prince of the old kingdom of Malinor, Ulfain, and a the human guide who led him on a journey through the human lands of Seventis. Vexanis lived a simple life, in his early childhood it was discovered that he was naturally skilled in the arcane and with his father began the journey to a College in the far north where he would be tutored. On the long and treacherous journey there, they were assailed by a roaming clan of bandits. His father fought bravely but there were to many. He was cut down before Vexanis' very eyes forever scaring the young child. 

Vexanis managed to escape the bandits, running into the cold forests of the far north. He lived closer to an animal that a sentient being eating raw meat and berries. It is a miracle that he survived the harsh winters, eventually after many years Vexanis found his way to the High Elves' Silver Enclave of Haeleun'or where he was rejected from entering due to his position in their society as a impure half-blood. He eventually smuggled his way into the city in a trading caravan but not before he had developed a hated of the puritan High Elves. When the Kingdom of Malinor crushed the Silver Enclave of Haeleun'or's nation Vexanis was found and reunited with his father's relatives, he lived with them until his 17th birthday on which he left the Elven Kingdoms after internal conflict began to rise. He, determined to rejoin his mother after many long years made the long perilous journey that had claimed his father's life and his childhood. Upon arriving at the village in which his mother resided he was shocked to find that it had been razed to the ground by bandits he found the home in which he had once lived and was greeted by the rotting corpse of his mother. With nothing left he resolved to devote himself entirely to the pursuit of knowledge and the eradication of the barbarian scum that had taken so much from him. He enrolled himself in the most esteemed college of the Arcane and learn much before being expelled for the pursuit of corrupted knowledge, he sought dominion over knowledge itself he sought to manipulate the mind of those he deemed unworthy. Once again finding himself with no place he called home he left on a journey the the Tree of the Mind where it was said he might learn mastery over the mind itself.

Personality Traits: Hateful, Arrogant, Aggressive, Manipulative, Unsocial,

 

Ambitions: To destroy the Nobility of the Elves and eradicate unlawful citizens to create a perfect society which he can rule. 

 

Strengths/Talents: Extremely intelligent, Skilled in the arcane

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Physically weak, Tires quickly due to malnourishment 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Tall (6,6), Pale, Red eyes, Snow white hair, thin from lack of malnutrition

 

Edited December 8, 2015 by Vexanis

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Your app needs improvements:

• You definitions are quite vague.
• Your character is, to be blunt, overpowered. Your lore is a clique to read a well, making it seem like an Inigo Montoya spinoff. Additional work on the app is required. Tell more about your journeys you've had, and add more about the people you met!
• Your strengths and weaknesses don't even out a bit. Your strengths are almost everything a man achieve, whilst your weaknesses are not even proper weaknesses as they are personality traits.
• Your skin does not match the theme of the server.

You have 24 hours to make these changes. Once complete, message me. Feel free to contact me or any other AT for help!

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