[Denied] jbobman application

[jaysgames 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: jbobman.
How old are you?: 17.
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying is strictly prohibited, and will not be condoned in any shape or form. If you promote, or take part in cyber bullying amongst the community, you will be punished just as severely.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Found it on google.
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: to assume the attitudes, actions, and discourse of another.
What is metagaming?: The act of using outside or previously gained knowledge within a gaming universe for personal gain or advantage.
What is powergaming?: A gamer who learnes the rules of a game inside and out to perfection in order to become the best at that game.
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Jay Zul.
Character’s sex: Male.
Character’s race: Human.
Character’s age: 18.
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
Jay never really knew much about his past after his mother died in a fire when he was out with his father. He grew up living with his father which he never got along with. So at the young age of 12 he ran away from home. He had to teach himself how to survive in the wild. Every night he has nightmare of the awful night to come home and see his house on fire with his mother inside. As Jay never found another village like he was hoping to the night he ran away, the wilderness became a home to him. He thought himself to hunt, make shelters and make weapons.

After a few years when Jay was 16 he decided to go home to see if his father was still alive and to make peace with him after running away from home. He could not find hi father at the house. But he was happy to see that some family had fixed it up and used it ad there home. Jay saw how happy the family was and it brought a tear to his eye. So he decided that he wanted to give up living in the wilderness all alone. So he headed off to find a place that maybe he could call home. He came across a few place and none of them seemed to work. He searched for 2 years trying to find the place he felt like he could call home. As he spent so much time living alone most he had nobody to talk to. So he made a wish that some day he will find a new home.

Personality Traits: Very shy, Kind, Keeps to himself
Ambitions: To get through life and its hardship
Strengths/Talents: Good at hunting, Stealthy
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Trusting people, Fragile
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5'6 ft, 68 kg. Blue hair. Red eyes.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):
 

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

You have been denied for following reasons:

• All of your definitions are plagiarized straight from the internet. This is your last warning.
• Mother dying in a fire and running away from home is quite frankly a cliche. Please add more to it!
• You have no server lore whatsoever. Please use our wiki page to add more into your biography! http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor
• Your skin does not match our server theme which is very to Lord of the Rings!

You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you need any help, feel free to contact me or any other AT for help!

[Crowbill 493]

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