[Denied] Broxigar Bloodhowl

[Broxigar 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: EvilPHT

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No bestiality

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? YouTube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: It´s being someone you are not, for fun and entertainment

What is metagaming?: metagaming is made of 2 words: Meta- which means "late" in greek i think and gaming, so i suppose it´s late game, meaning when you have got some gear or experience (didn´t have to Google, so it might be wrong)

What is powergaming?: I believe it´s playing for a short period of time, but playing much, kinda like a "burst"

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Broxigar

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 45

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Broxigar was raised by orcs at the moment his mother died, that´s why his name ist human at all. Being raised by orcs, Broxigar gained their temperement and their will to fight. He was trained to be like one of them, but he never could, because his human side was very strong.

Personality Traits: Polite, very agressive in certain situations

Ambitions: strenght and knowledge

Strengths/Talents: Very strong, almost as strong as an orc, very good with swords

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Can´t think correctly in a situation of battle if injured (because of high adrenaline rush), can´t use bows

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): black/grey hair, 1,8m high, 80k weight

[Greener 687]

Under Review

[Greener 687]

You have been denied for many reasons! Fix these issues below.

 

• Your roleplaying definitions needs to be expanded. 
• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are wrong I suggest reading here but do not copy any of it. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying
• Your biography is too short and needs to be atleast 2 paragraphs and to have included server lore such as towns and events. I suggest reading here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans
• Being raised by orcs do not make sense as a lot of orc childhood involves showing off your strength etc. A human wouldn't just fit in. This is my suggestion to improve your biography for next time. 
• Traits and ambitions need to be expanded. 

You may reapply in 24 hours after the time of this denial.

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