[Denied] QuietArcher's Whitelist Application

[QuietArcher 2]

What's your Minecraft Account Name?: QuietArcher

 

How old are you?: 16

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won't be denied for being under 13): Yep!

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yep!

 

What's the rule you agree with the most?: Sticking to the lore. It creates more immersion, if everyone keeps to it, and has a good understanding of it. I've had too many past experiences with people constantly doing what they wanted, and ignoring the given lore. 

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don't make sense? I believe I have an understanding of the rules.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Through two of my friends joining up with it! (shadowtail00, and JazzBoatman).
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: Taking on the role of a character and portraying them to the best of you abilities.
What is metagaming?: Using  information your character doesn't know to progress further in game.
What is powergaming?: Creating an overpowered character, with little to none weaknesses.
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play. 

 

Character's name: Lynn Mannering

 

Character's sex: Female

 

Character's race: Human Highlander

 

Character's age: 18

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don't contradict history.): 

 

After her mother abandoned her, for fear of being outcast by her family, Lynn was raised alone by her father. Her father had always craved a son, so he raised her like one. She trained, and grew an interest in combat- be it hand to hand, swordsmanship, or archery.

When she came of age, her father, fearing he would fall to the Iblees curse, set up an arranged marriage with a wealthy Heartlander, knowing she would be safe, and live a good life. 

Outraged, Lynn fled from her home, to Felsen, where she currently resides.  

 

Personality Traits: Seemingly cold, but will eventually warm up to those she feels she can trust. Often shy at times, and can be arrogant if she feels threatened. 

 

Ambitions: Growing more knowledge in the field of hunting, and archery.

 

Strengths/Talents: Self-discipline, Hunting and Archery, and physical strength.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:  Finds it hard to trust others and open up, and is no good at magic. 

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):
Height, 5'5", messy blonde hair, determined bright blue eyes, small build, and pale skin.

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character's skin

 

http://imgur.com/trmoYb4 

http://imgur.com/7Qb3UAO

[mitto 2312]

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

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(1)

 

Please include more important events in your characters life which have moulded them to be who they are today. Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age.

 

 

(2)

 

Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.

 

Links:

Race

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans

 

Island

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

Anything else

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

 

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You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

 

 

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.