[Denied] Football_King89's Application

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Football_King89

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I am fully aware of the server being PG-13.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have read and agree with the Server Rules.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rules I agree with the most is that players must stay in roleplay.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found Lord of the Craft by looking for Roleplay servers and I tried a few in the past but they weren't as good as I have hoped and this server has more information and looks like you guys keep track of everything and making sure the server stays in a roleplay environment which I do like!

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplay is like playing if it was real life.

What is metagaming?: Meta-Gaming is kinda like knowing stuff that your character doesn't know but you do and you use as a advantage.

What is powergaming?: People who Powergame usually RolePlay's things which may be impossible to do, leaving the other player no chance to fight back.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Jordy Sword

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human (Heartlander)

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

  1) Jordy Sword had always lived with his parents as a child. They lived in Crownlands. At a very young age of 7 Jordy's father Atticus  started teaching Jordy on how to fight and other skills such as being a blacksmith and going on mining adventures. At the age of 12 Jordy's parents were murdered and Jordy was moved to live with a nearby family. There he continued to practice what his father has taught him so he can have a bright future someday. When Jordy was a teenager, he would join tournaments to see who was best in hand to hand combat, he also would compete against others on who can craft better items to see who is a better blacksmith.

  2) When Jordy turned 18 he didn't know what he wanted to actually do in his life. Maybe become a soldier, or a blacksmith, or a miner, but overall he has his whole life ahead for him and guess time will tell on what he does. But on what he will do, hopefully affects how his life folds up with me and other people.

Personality Traits: Social, hardworking, caring, etc.

Ambitions: Jordy wants to get known to the world both affecting the world and the people around him.

Strengths/Talents: Smart, decent fighter, decent worker, quick.   

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Sometimes gets into arguments with others. When making a mistake, the mistake is big and can impact multiple people and himself. Small person in size so ain't as strong as others.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6'2, 200 Pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): Unable to put picture here due to the size being too big but I am able to show you it in-game so you can make sure it is alright for the server and the skin is of a medieval human since I am going to be a Heartlander Human.

Edited January 10, 2016 by Football_King89
To make application better.

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What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

-Your powergaming definition is wrong.

-Please include more lore as well as expand upon your biography.

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-Your powergaming definition was plagiarized. Continuing to do so will lead to an application ban.

-You must add more lore into your biography.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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