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[SenapeHunter 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:SenapeHunter

How old are you?:30

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):ok

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The one that says that i must play like my character

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? i saw it on youtube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:roleplay is a way to immerse yourself in another world ,  and impersonate a hero that you create by yourself ... RP is a way to team with others and have fun togheter

What is metagaming?: Is a situation where the gamer should act like his character but he doesn't... and he uses game exploits, don't act like his character , using the gamer knowledge and not the character's one

What is powergaming?: is when I do something impossible for an human ... for example lift the machine with a finger

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:SenapeHunter

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:30

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

biography:  SenapeHunter was born in a little village around the mountains , since 5 years old his father brought him at hunting and  training him with anytype of fight situation ... At the age of 16 SenapeHunter moved with her mother  to the nearest city to train in a real academy but something went wrong. During the move they were going through a street in the woods when a group of bandits attacked the caravan, he tried to fight but he wasn't ready and the bandits killed her mother stealing gold and all their supplies . SenapeHunter escaped in the woods where thanks to the teachings of his father he survived the night.

The next morning he walked out the forest and found the way to the city. He started to steal for survive and in a month he get banned from the city and he settled in a little cave. 

One day , while he was hunting a deer he fell down from a  high rock hurting himself on the arm and he fainted , fortunately a misterious man found him and he put SenapeHunter on his caravan....

When he awoke , he was in a strange house , and outside there was the misterious man who was training with a sword. This man trained him for many years until SenapeHunter decided to go back to his house with his father but when he arrived at the village he found only reamins of a big fire.

Senape was full of pain ... he took refuge in a dark cave where he become  totally mad.

At 27 years he decided to go back to the civilization ...

He looks like a jester and now he is know as "Mad Knife" because he travel to every city looking for his favourite job : hunt dark creatures like witches , werewolves and vampires.

 

Personality Traits: A very mad person , he looks very scary 

Ambitions: No ambitions , maybe just find the bandits who killed his family 

Strengths/Talents: He is really good with the sword , there isn't a  soldier who can beat him

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He becomes more crazy day by day , he is very afraid of the day when he won't be able to fight anymore cause of his madness

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):he is 178 cm. and 65 kg... he has short black hair , brown eyes , a muscolar physique.

[CheekyNolan 5420]

Pending

• SenapeHunter is not an acceptable name, please change it to a normal one.
• Your biography include no server lore, please add some of which can be found here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
• Being a bandit, trained by a mysterious old sword master and being insane is very overused. I'd recommend changing this.
• Werewolves and vampires are not accepted pieces of lore on this server, please remove them from your biography.
• Your character needs an ambition.
• I would refrain from saying you are the best at something, especially fighting, as it is almost certain someone far outsells your rp capabilities.
• Your skin is made for a female, please find something more suiting.

You have 24 hours to make the following changes. If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

 

[CheekyNolan 5420]

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