[Denied] Aplication for white list for AlexFTWXx

[AlexFTWXx 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:  AlexFTWXx

How old are you?:  11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):  I may be young but I make up my years with maturity

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:  yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: not to argue with the gm's

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no they seem pretty simple to me

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?  it is one of a kind and is a great roleplay server (I have searched for a long time to find something like this) found it over the internet

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:  The act of acting out a part in something for fun or entertainment

What is metagaming?:  Strategy method or action used in a game to go beyond the limits of the game refers to the game universe outside the game itself

What is powergaming?: the aim toward maximizing progress to a goal (usually found in rp games such as this)

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Alexander (not a reference to famous old people irl)

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: human

Character’s age: 15

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

When he was young his parents divorced. He ran away from his home to be found buy a old elf . The elf taught him the ways of the land and how to keep it safe.

One day the castle he lived in with the elf was stormed by ghouls.       The leader of the gouls killed the elf right infront of him the elfs lasts words were to him he said run
!     He ran he grew up the rest of the way into the woods avoiding big patrols of bandits and ghouls and attacking loners for supplies. He rellized he did wrong attacking people was

not te way to live. from there on out he went into town doing good deeds and earning  his way in life he will never forget the elf that had taken him in!

 

 

 

Personality Traits:

Ambitions: to live his life in peace and live humbly on the edge of a town

Strengths/Talents: Always willing to help really good at sneaking around

Weaknesses/Inabilities: not that great in social areas sometimes is medeocerly emotional.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6 feet 2 inches tall and weighs 113 pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://i.imgur.com/6egdlpM.png?1

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• Your defintions are either vague, incorrect or borderline plagiarized. Please expand on them using your own examples. Feel free to consult our wiki page about roleplaying here! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
• Your application is quite short, frankly. The usual size is two medium paragraphs. Would you kindly expand it?
• Your current story seems like a cliche (Undead raid and the dead mentor). Can you please add some more work into your story?
• Could you please add more lore into your application? Feel free to use our wiki about our current Realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• You're missing personality traits. This helps build our your character!
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to them.

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.