[Denied] Whitelist Application

[TheMovies 0]

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:TheMovies

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am aware.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): I have not applied before.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule about non-offensive builds, I like this because it stops people from wrecking the area.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No rules confuse me

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Friend

 

What is roleplaying? Roleplaying is acting out a part or job with others to make it more fun.

What is met gaming? Being out of character. Knowing something that character shouldn't know

What is power gaming? Is saying that you will kill/damage someone without giving them a chance to attack/counter you.

Character’s name: Jeoff Torena

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Wood Elf

Character’s age: 57

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long.

Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

Jeoff was born in the Laureh'lin and has been on an adventure to the kingdom of Oren to visit a old friend. He also ventured across the lands and has faced many terrors and harsh environments. He fears the Manticore (lore creature I think) the most as it is a dangerous beast that almost tore his arm off. Jeoff lived near his many relatives in the forest like most wood elves and practices his bow skills on fish and birds. He is also a good axemen even though that is not a normal thing for elven kind but he likes to stand out to the crowd.  He loves fish and likes chicken and can get quite hungry at times, when he is adventuring.

 

Jeoff used to be a weak, he was a small elf and was bullied by his bigger peers but he trained and trained and now is able to wield a bow and axe and grew to a quite big height. His adventurous spirit takes him around the lands but sometimes gets him into trouble with other kind, like orcs. He had a really good friend called Kool but he went on and adventure with some other elves and they never came back. Jeoff has a little sister named Vahlia. She has the same kind of mindset as him and is only 15. Jeoff is very happy where he lives and adventures to far off lands. For some reason he fears the  cave cow (mooshroom) as whenever he sees them he shivers. He lives In The province of Laureh'lin with his family which is located right next to a river, this is where his father taught him to fish. He wants to have a family and a home right next to a river. He is not very like his kind as he isn't as nature orientated, this is due to the fact that when he was young he was almost taken into a dark forest by a crazy man. He was only 15 when this happened. He was sitting around near his house in his village and was all of a sudden snatched and picked up onto a horse by a cloaked being and was dropped into a very large thorn bush. After this all happened he was taken back by a hunting party which were part of The Order Of Sirame and now wants to join them.

 

Personality Traits: Bold, Adventurous, happy, likes to stand out.

 

Ambitions: He wants to become a great warrior. Jeoff wants to join The Order Of Sirame.

He wants to join the elf army.

Strengths/Talents: Is good at archery. Strong minded, doesn’t collapse to peer pressure. Agile and fast.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Over Confident, can give up if something is hard, different. Can’t mine very well. He always rushes into battle and doesn't think before he acts. His  hair can go over his face sometimes, making him temporarily blind.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He is quite tanned and stands at 5"9 and has special Torena family Armour. His has brown hair which covers his head. He has worrn leather boots and has green eyes. He has a small dagger which is made of pure bone and is always by his side.  http://imgur.com/2Ur8pi7

 

I hope you accept my application. If not can you please alert me of my errors and I will right another. Thankyou

TheMovies

 

 

[_mkkk_ 194]

Sadly, this application has been denied due to not providing the specified changes. You may reapply in 24 hours and if having to make changes next time, use the edit button rather than make a whole new application. If you have any questions, message me! Concerning your application, you listened to my first suggestion fully of tweaking the city piece. However, you didn't really seem to listen to my other piece of advice including developing a story rather than tiny sentences of many instances blended together. Maybe play off one of them to a greater extent, providing more detail or even how it affected him rather than just stating what the event was. Remember, don't apply before 24 hours are up or it will be automatically denied.

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