[Denied] HayLay's Application

[HayLay 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: HayLay

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The prohibition of cyber-bullying.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? From a friend named TheFiend.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: When two or more characters are acting using imagination.

What is metagaming?: When you use out-of-character information to roleplay.

What is powergaming?: Forcing roleplay on someone.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Quenilda Postmael

Character’s sex: Female.

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): My parent were killed in the current dwarf war that is being fought right now. I am a pure elf that was kidnapped by two dwarf soldiers whom my father had worked for. He had committed treason within his work.

Personality Traits: Blunt, normally reserved, shy.

Ambitions: Wants to make people laugh.

Strengths/Talents: Archery.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Melee fighting.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Brown hair, lightly tanned skin, About 5.5 feet tall, about 100 lbs.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied. . .

 

-Your meta-gaming definition needs to be expanded upon alot. Try to define the act of meta-gaming, maybe use an example?

 

-Your power-gaming definition is incorrect.

 

-Your character's biography is far too short.

 

-Your character's biography is lacking in any server lore.

 

-You dont explain in your character's biography how they got their skills.

 

-You need to expand upon almost all of your character's information.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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