[Denied] Applaction for Lord craft (Fixed)

[Blakeson 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: MonkeySlayz

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware that  the server is PG-13.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have read over all the rules and conditions.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree most with the prohibition of Cyberbullying.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: No, all rules and conditions seem reasonable and rational.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friend gave me the IP

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is a the act upon creating your very own character and his/her backstory. From there you act as the character you have created using their personality and backstory to progress in their future. This usually is done in gaming, but can be done in real life to.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is the knowledge that you have in real life such as mathematical statistics, and apply to to your roleplaying character. An example would your RP character comes across a new monster/creature, but if you were familiar with from sources other than your RP character. Something like plot information etc...

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is unreasonably/unrealistically making player, do something that wouldn’t make sense in a rational sense, such as “Bob blows up The Dragon King using his mind powers,” just an example but as you see in something like Lord of the Rings, that wouldn’t make a bit of sense at all.

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Mark

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Christian r

Character’s age: 17

Biography  (Mark was only 5 when his father died,  and his mother didn't know how to handle it.  She abused Mark to make her feel better Mark started to leave the house more often terrified of life, of his mother, and almost everything else in between. After a while he started to not come home, he was 6 when he came home he was wounded almost everywhere clothes ripped, shredded. His mother was happy to see him and he thought maybe life would be better but when he was 8 she started abusing him again. Mark was ready to die, ready to throw himself off a bridge. Mark was a great kid but this changed him, he was not going to be abused again but he had no choice he hade to wait. Mark was 9 and tried working at places like the blacksmiths shop. But they said he was too young, he wanted a job to get away from his mom. He tried the vegetable stand, the farm, and the army they all said he was too young he was sad, angry and scared, he had no other options. he walked around his village hoping to see a place to work then he saw a job that might work for him, it was the place where they made all the clothing and blankets and everything that was sown together. He tried to get a job there they said he could for a bit but not forever. Mark  worked there until he was 15 they said he was old enough to get a better job. so he went home that day to see his mother he was ready to face what she was about to do to him. when he opened the door a bow was aimed for his head. Terrified, he backed away slowly. He thought why would my mother do that she's CRAZY!  he ran off away from his small village to a new a place a better one to Vailor.):

Personality Traits: Shy, Nervous, Nice, Smart, Strong, Friendly.

Ambitions: to meet new friends, to get over his fears, to help those like him and every one else. 

Strengths/Talents: can save and help others, can focus no matter what. 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: hard to see parents/Older people, wants to meet more people but mostly cant

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): he's 6 foot 1 and is 140 pounds

this is him ---> 

[Crowbill 493]

You have been denied for following reasons:

• Parts of your application have been plagiarized from other applications. This is your last warning.
• Please choose one of the common races for a start. (human, dwarf, orc, elf)
• Except the mentioning of Vailor, no other lore is used. Please add more server lore to your biography. Feel free to use our wiki about our current realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

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