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[DeathGamerVP 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: DeathGamerVP

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 : Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No use of hacked clients such as xrray

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A YouTube trailer

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is role-playing?:

in my opinion roleplaying is when you take a carecter and play as hime in rpg games or movies. Etc: the person how played gndalf was roleplaying him.
What is meta-gaming?: is any strategy or action used in a game/movie

What is power-gaming?: is a style of interacting with games like video games, boardgames , films and more.

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Greyleaf

 

 

Character’s sex: male
Character’s race: elf
Character’s age: 76

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradiction history.):

pore Grayleaf got lost in the wood and now has to find his way back to . he was raised by his mother and his father died in war

with humans and dwarves.he will now revenge for what they did to his dad.many years later he became a worrier who was the

fastest in the clan of elf's. but on day he got a task from his leader to get the hart stone to the king because he was dying from an arrow in his

shest. sadly Grayleaf didn't do the task the king died and he was about to be exicuted for failure as he managed to escape the town with his speedy legs. Thrue the suwers he managed to get out of the town/sity he ran so fast and cried for his mother to be okay. he wondered in the forest as Barry were his only way to be dehydrated and say alive for a couple of weeks. his lost. Grayleaf has to find his friend how lives in a town far away by taking a guess were is west. he soon finds a river. he then follows the river and appearers in a town he never sow he looks around and asks a stranger to bring him to where his friend is. the stranger agrees and asks for 10 gold coins. Greyleaf gets him ten gold. The stranger brings

him home on his donkey. Grayleaf arrives to his friend with no food or water for 3 days. his friend feeds him and caries his to

bed. he told the story and now got a team member to revenge the humans and dwarves for killing his father.

 

 

Personality Traits: He likes adventures and likes being with a friend, Likes to get fit.

Ambitions:trys to parkour and be as silent as a mouse.

Strengths/Talents: Fast at running jumping and can hold his breath more than 5 min.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: cant hold more than 70kg

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

 

weight:45KG

hight: 1.65 meters

Skin: Fair

Body: Slender but muscled enough to wield a large sword

Eyes:Green like a septiceye

Hair: very black

 

Appearance, please provide us a screen-shot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screen-shot guide here):

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-Your entire application is dreadfully written, filled with typos and errors.

 

-Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are incorrect.

 

-Your character's biography is dreadfully written.

 

-Your character's biography does not include any sevrer lore but the mention of an ambiguous human-dwarf war.

 

-Having one's character's parents randomly killed by a broad group and than vowing revenge is unfathomably cliche, and unoriginal. 

 

-You're not supposed to change the format of the application. Please do not do so again.

 

-You failed to include a screenshot of your minecraft skin.

 

-. . . Jacksepticeye's septiceye (septic sam) has a blue iris, it is it's sclera that is green.

 

-You need to expand upon your character's strengths, weaknesses, personality, and ambitions.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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