[Denied] MY CHARACTER

[cptn_spark1 0]

name Mr spark aka the plague master

gender male

age 13

I am aware this server is pg-13

I agree with the rules. and more than willing to accept the consequences is I disobey the servers rules.

I found out about this server through youtube.

a roleplaying game is a game where you play through a certain theme as your character.

metagaming is treating your game as more than a game and breaking the 4th wall.

powergaming is playing a board game role play game or computer game until you compelet a goal.

 

my character

name: Mr spark aka plague master.

sex: male

race: demon

age: unknown     

 

he is a master of black magic is job is to control black magic out breaks such as the black plague. He judges creature by there actions instead of there race. And believes all creatures are capable of doing good and bad things. he's kind but dangerous. and likes having a fairy around him. he likes the idea of  a fairy watching over him. he travels to only where he is needed. He looks scary sometimes but he's quite charming.     

 

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[_mkkk_ 194]

Your application has sadly been denied due to the some things that need to be changed. Don't worry though! You may reapply after the next 24 hours and within that time you may redo your application. Please I ask, don't reapply before the requested time or you will be denied by default since this is our policy. Message me if you have any concerns! These changes need to be made in your next application: 

~Your application isn't following the required application format and is rather too chopped up to exactly pinpoint all that your missing. Please refer to this for your next application and follow the suggestions like to include lore in your biography. The format is below:
 

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:

How old are you?:

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:

What is metagaming?:

What is powergaming?:

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:

Character’s sex:

Character’s race:

Character’s age:

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Personality Traits:

Ambitions:

Strengths/Talents:

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):

~This point will address all your issues in the biography. No one can play as a daemon. Stick to the races allowed for when applying such as dwarf, human, elf, halfling, etc. No character is allowed to be made knowing magic being your 'black magic' spoken of which isn't really even in the lore. You may have interaction with a fairy, but you can't claim one already before being in the game. It requires RP to do that. Also have a realistic name please, not a title.

~Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are wrong. I ask you edit these please and make sure not to plagiarize please, one of your definitions has something in it quite similar to another on the internet. 

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Moved to Denied Application Forum.