application [Denied] [Pending] Character Application Kiritusa

[Quicksillver7 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Quicksillver7

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13: Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No use of Memes or Trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Looking for a good and serious rp server

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is a way of pretending that your are something or someone else in a fictional way

What is metagaming?: Breaking the forth wall in the Rp and bending the rules

What is powergaming?: Stating something happens, generally in your advantage, with no consideration for others

 

Character’s name: Kiritusa Metasfix

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 27

Biography: Kiritusa (or Kiri for short) is a descendant of Krug. He lives in Ravenhold despite it being for elves. He made good friends with the elves at the age of 10 and lived there ever since. He fashioned his armour from the ores in the mines.

He usually goes to Laurelin for supplies. As I said, he is a descendant of Krug meaning that he is not easily fooled like the great man.

Personality Traits: He is a Sociopath but is friends with elves, he is willing to give up his life for others safety. He also has a VERY short fuse!

Ambitions: He always wished to visit the Cloud Temple

Strengths/Talents: He is a skilled minor and barterer. He has been known to kill a family of orcs when they kidnapped his adopted Dad

Weaknesses/Inabilities: His weakness is that he is weak in the left leg. He is unable to support weight with it.

Appearance: He is fairly tall for his age and is well built. (I Cannot get the skin layout)

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This application has been placed under pending due to some requirements not being met. Don't fret! You may edit the application and send me messages if you have any questions in order to be evaluated again. You must make the requested changes within the next 24 hours or this application will be denied automatically without providing me a reason as to why you couldn't. Concerning your application, great definitions! The only issues are:

~Your biography is way too short and includes improper usage of lore. A descendant of krug would be an uruk (orc) rather than a human. Your use of cities as lore is decent and your attempt at lore concerning the races was good, but it needs to be correct. I would search through the wiki for this. This could include anything from major events, religion, or major cities in your biography in order to show you comprehend server lore well. For humans, generally they follow the Creator so maybe you could include this?

~And your skin isn't present upon the application. You either need to update it onto the application or either send me a link to it. I would suggest uploading the skin to imgur and placing the link on here so I can put it on and see for myself in MC (this is a last resort). Otherwise, I suggest taking a screenshot using the F2 button and then going to /run, type %appdata%, go to .minecraft, then go to screenshots in order to place the image onto your desktop, and then upload it to imgur or onto the application so I may see it.

~Your ambition is rather. . . really simple since you'll start from the Cloud Temple at spawn. I would try to do something more out of reach!
 

[_mkkk_ 194]

Your application has sadly been denied due to your failure to correct the requested changes. Don't worry though! You may reapply after the next 24 hours and within that time you may redo your application. Please I ask, don't reapply before the requested time or you will be denied by default since this is our policy. Message me if you have any concerns! The changes that I addressed above need in your next application.

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