[✔] [Accepted] [Redacted] [Pending] Corruptic Application {Changes Made to Bio}

[Corruptic 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Corruptic

How old are you?: 18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have indeed.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: " The abuse of glitches or any exploits are not tolerated. " I'm sick and tired of players using exploits to better them selves in a game, cheaters never prosper.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): None of them confuse me in the slightest.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: minecraft-mp.com

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying usually involves a person or player involving themselves in a different role, when they undergo roleplay they become a completely different person, their past life is left behind them and they are free to start anew, in a new world as a new person.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is using knowledge the player in question could not possibly have access to either to affect the game or change themselves.

What is powergaming?: A powergamer is someone who tries to gain power in any means necessary including breaking the rules and leaving the story behind, they also dont accept responses to emotes or make a super powered character.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name:Valsis

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Dark Elf.

Character’s age: 122.

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

 

Valsis was born in Vivec, upon his birth his mother and father: Corru and Tress had a remarkable discovery, their child Valsis was born with blood a red eye, fearful that this child was corrupted he was cast unto the street, an orphan from birth. As a child he was raised in the wilds around Vivec, raised mainly by wandering strangers until he turned 50. On his 50th birthday Valsis decided to leave Vivec in order to search the world for meaning in his life.

 

He had traveled to almost every Capital in all of Vailor when per chance he came upon a sanctuary, desperate for answers he entered. What happened to him in there remains a mystery to this day, all that is  known is after he came out of that place he just wasn't the same... 

 

Years went past as Valsis wandered the world searching for a purpose, until one fateful day he wondered into Annil'sul, Valsis found this place to be kind and fair, fit for someone to learn about the different cultures of the world and at the same time learn more about himself too. Valsis has spend the majority of his life living in Annil'sul and has grown a custom to the people whom live there, he also found work as a hunter, using his silent steps to sneak up on the animals, allowing him to gain lots of employment.

 

Valsis has spent the majority of his days gathering food and resources so that one day he may too start a life of his own in the wilds, and leave all of his bad memories behind him. Valsis still yearns for something more in his life, he wants to be someone important- someone treated with respect and dignity by all he comes across, and so Valsis treats all he meets with the same respect and dignity he himself would like to have one day.

 

 

 

Personality Traits: Valsis hides from everyone he doesn't know.

Ambitions: Valsis wants to become someone important, someone whom won't be thrown away.

Strengths/Talents:Valsis is pretty stealthy, he can hide when need be, but he could be better.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: People skills, being raised by animals means he is frightened of every new person. He is also unable to swim, making travel by water dangerous.

Appearance: Valsis wears a black and red robes, he has black hair and blood red eyes.

Skin: Skin picture is attatched Above!

 

Edited March 9, 2016 by Corruptic
Bio has been updates as per request.

[Corvoo 562]

Your application has been put on [PENDING]
 
What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

- In your bio, you state that your character was raised by animals. This is a cliche, and very unrealistic. I ask that you edit your bio in a way that would make more sense. I would also suggest having your character live somewhere else other than the cloud temple. As far as I'm aware, only monks are actually allowed to live there.
 
If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.
 
 
You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

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