[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] TWolffe's Application (Re-edited)

[TWolffe 2]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft account name?: TWolffe

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 : Yes, I am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes and I do agree to them.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: "If you die in roleplay, your character will not remember the events leading up to the death. Waking up knowing who killed you is metagaming."

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: I am very clear with the Rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found this server through a video.

Definitions

roleplaying: Acting or playing as a character and playing out their actions and feelings and essentially taking on the role of said character.

metagaming: It's basically going out of character. So for example, having knowledge that your character isn't aware of.

power-emoting: Is pretty much having your character over powered. With them doing almost UN-natural and impossible things. Like, "Tim shoots an arrow a mile away and it hits random guard number 2 in the eye"

or " Tim beheads him with a single slice of his dagger"

In-Character Information

Name: Tim Wolffe

Gender: Male

Race: Human (Heartlander)

Age: 17

Biography :Tim Wolffe Was born in 1536 in Felsen. His father was a human who lived in Felsen and had farm land around Felsen, While Tim's mother was a high elf. Tim's father left his mother while he was born due to Tim's father being apart of the Orenian forces. With his father participating in the siege of fort Rhewengrad. Tim's Mother died giving birth to him and he was sent to live with his aunt whom helped raised him. At the age of 6 his father came back with the corpse of his uncle, Whom died during the siege of Kal'Ordholm, and had taken his son back . Telling Tim stories of the battles and Sieges that he had participated in. Then he had a sense of being like his father with taking his honor and lessons such as, Caring for his own weapon. Or one lesson where he told Tim, "If you was to sentence a man to death, do it yourself, For the man who passes the sentence, should swing the sword". When Tim was 12 he started training with his father. Due to Tim's skinnier appearance, he was a fast and quick fighter. Soon his father had remarried to a human woman. Then at age 16, He was given his family's ancestral sword, "Wolf's bite" then vowed never to lose it, Tim then asked his father about his mother, since his father never talked about her. He only knew she was a high elf. His father then promised him, that tomorrow, they shall talk about his mother. But then his father fainted and died in his arms, and his new mother accuses Tim had killed his father. Tim really suspects that his step-mother poisoned him. Tim left and was then hunted down and narrowly escapes the guards and was able to catch a boat to Sancuary. Where He joined a hunting group whom traveled all around the Oren lands for a year, then one day they unknowing sailed into Urguan lands and the group were almost all slaughtered. The captain, Sir Richard, was like a second father to Tim, and promised to knight him when they returned from the trip. But Sir Richard is shot by 5 arrows one in his throat and a lance is thrown in his lung. He falls and Tim has him in his arms as he slowly chokes on his blood with Tim not being able to do anything, but watch as a terrified boy. Tim made it out of the ambush but just barely, with him being thrown into the ocean, Being forced to swim ashore, But "Wolf's Bite" was lost in the process and he rides to the cloud Temple to recruit more people to help him retake his fathers land and fortress and get back the sword. But the things that happened in his life traumatized him. Considering that he is only 17 He can't sleep with both his father and Sir Richard dying in his arms, and the promises that they made him, haunts him and he sees their faces in his sleep. He ultimately feels betrayed by them, but also he blames himself for both of them died in his arms, with him being able to do nothing at all. He still hears the voice of the first man that he killed (The guard who hunted him) And he wants correct the wrongs that have happened and become the lord that his father wanted him to be.

Ambitions: Tim really wants to gain vengeance for his hunting group. And to one day, reclaim his father's land and find his Families sword. But afterwards, ride to sancuary and inform the town that their hunting group is dead, and return Sir Richard's dagger back to his family. And finally to one day, be knighted to Sir Tim Wolffe, since he believes in chivalry and wants to be seen like that, not (that kid who killed his father to get lands) like his mother portrays him. He ultimately wants to be proven a man.

Strengths/Talents: His honor, he always have that sense of doing the "right" thing. But he also loved to sing, and whenever he rides he sings to himself. But his frail form allows him to move quicker. But also Tim has been experiencing some weird things, in his dreams he sees things that have or haven't happened yet. but is unsure when or where it takes place or if its a vision or an actual thing. But it did tell/show Tim to be on his guard on a ship.

(The Uruguan Attack)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Tim's greatest weakness is him acting without thinking nor the consequence, His temper sometimes gets to the best of him. But also his honor could be a potential weakness, for he would do the "Right" thing, and it may sometimes not be the smartest or beneficial thing to him. He also thinks himself a better fighter than he actually is. But also since he is technically highborn he sometimes shows off and thinks himself better than some. And the fact that he is haunted by his father and Sir Richards promises, it really affects his decisions and makes him "Weaker" in a way. And his temper gets to the best of him, when people call him "Boy" instead of his name or man.

Appearance: Tim is "6,2" and weighs 120 pounds and is quite thin for his age. With Black curly hair and blue eyes. And pale white skin like his mom. He also retains a small point at the end of his ears like elves, but they aren't apparent.  He wears a dark brown jacket with his families wolf crest on his right arm. He carries a "Hand-And-a-half" sword that is in the same sheath that contained "Wolf's Bite". A leather shoulder sheathed that is dyed white with a bronze strap belt. He carried that (Hand and a half sword means that the sword is a sword that is longer than a broad sword with the hilt of a long sword and it is balanced like a short sword so it could be used with both or one hand)

Skin:

Edited April 1, 2016 by Tim Wolffe
Thank you for telling what was wrong with it and telling me what year it was, i was confused in the wiki. Also i fixed all the things you mentioned!

[jamesb 218]

 

 

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Your application has been put on [PENDING]

 

Simply put, this application is good! After a few minor changes have been made, you'll be on your way to LotC. Once you've made the required edits, or if you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message. Failure to inform me that the changes have been made, will, unfortunately, result in a denial.

 

- Please expand upon your power gaming definition, it is quite lacking right now. Feel free to visit HERE for aid in this section.

- You've spelled the Orenian capital as "Felson", when it is actually spelled "Felsen". Please correct this.

- The current date on LotC is 1553. If Tim was born in 1536, he would be 17. 

- Expand upon your weaknesses. Does your character have a bad temper? Due to his frail form, is he weaker than most? Is he irresponsible? Etc.

- Your biography could use some fleshing out. It's unclear whether or not Tim's mother blames him for his father's death. Does she? If so, does being wrongly accused of murdering his father have any effect on Tim's life?

- "Vengeance" is a common, cliche ambition. It's OK to keep it, but please add another one. Maybe he dreams to start his own guild one day? Or become some sort of merchant?
 

Do not make a new post, simply use the “Edit” button to modify your current post.

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

 

[jamesb 218]

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Your Application has been [ACCEPTED]

 

This application is accepted. On the behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a whitelisted player. Please wait patiently as a GM will implement you to the server shortly! While you are waiting you are more than welcome to browse the forums and/or Wiki to refresh your mind on server events and lore.

[jamesb 218]

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