[Denied] Amelia3352 Application

[Amelia3352 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Amelia3352

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The one about the memes. They are funny the first time, but the amount of times they are repeated is really annoying.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Youtube Video

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is taking a role as a character other than yourself. Almost like acting.

What is metagaming?: A strategy you use in a game.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Similar to Godmodding. Basically acting powerful beyond being fair.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Lyana Bayrin

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) I was born in a tiny ranch with my parents. There was no name for that piece of land. All my parents told me was that they had dark pasts and had to escape from their sins. It actually wasn't too bad, the weather was always warm and sunny and I grew up in peace. I started to get restless in my older years. I was sick of living on the tiny farm and wanted to go outside the small ranch. I caught a couple times sneaking outside.

I never knew of history, and the outside world as my parents only taught me how to read and write. When a plague wiped the area. My parents were unlucky and caught it. All the animals caught it too and they died. We were starving and eventually they died too. I was scared for what would happen to me. Everything in my life was gone. I traveled a bit, and learned about this world, the things I had never known. I decided I would travel to the place called Felsen, a kingdom made up of humans and other creatures. I traveled slowly on foot, and eventually when I reached it I was out of luck. A violent siege was raging and I hid in the woods for months until the horror was over. I was scared, still young and most people treated me like a rat. I felt like an outcast in that city. An orphan, A hobo, no one of any use. I felt lost.

 

This continued for 2 years until I decided to go to the place called Vandoria. It was small but Felsen was horrible and I couldn't find any enjoyment in there. I used the few dollars I had to get some food and supplies and I made my way there in a month. Things were better. I was treated better, and I was older, wiser. People started treating me like something important, good. I realized I had found a home. I was making money more steadily and I felt confident I was going to survive.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Likes:Nature Stubborn, Quiet

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) She wishes to be a war general secretly.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Sword Combat

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Archery

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Red hair, Auburn/red eyes.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

 

 

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[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect.

 

-Your power-emoting definition is not incorrect, yet it is not correct either. Please further define such.

 

-Your character's biography does not explain where she came from, likewise making mention of 'dollars', which do not exist in the world Lord Of The Craft Takes place in.

 

-A lack of proficiency at something does not count as a weakness. So simply 'archery' cannot be a weakness. please further define such.

 

-Red eyes is an unnatural trait for humans, and given how your character is not albino, it is properly impossible. Please rectify such.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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