[Denied] [Pending] Faylen's Application form

[anormann101 0]

Application form

 

Minecraft Account name: anormann

My Age: 13 going on 14

Are you aware the sever is PG-13?: yes I do

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yep

What is the rule you agree with the most?: the rule that states that any rude or hostile behavior is not tolerated.

Are there any rules that you do not understand?: Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My cousin

Links to past application:Here is a link to my profile with the applications on it: www.lordofthecraft.net/profile/83072-anormann101/

 

Definitions

 

Role-playing is when you found or made a character that you enjoy and act as the character to the best of your ability's.

Meta-gaming is when you have learned or gained knowledge of a game like a cheat and use it to your advantage.

Power-emoting is when you unfairly force your actions or options on another player so they have little choice but to follow what you have done.

 

Character information 

 

Character Name: Faylen Normoira

Characters sex: Female

Characters Race: Elf

Characters Age: 48

Biography: Faylen grew away from people and civilization. She would pick up on things sometimes about the world around her like about the Treaty of Fiandria, Kalenz Uradir , and about Phaedrus'Yar. Preferring the company of animals to other humanoids, introverted and finding joy in the taste of wild game, she resides on the deepest of forests. Her main weapon of choice is a hunting bow and her wolf companion. No proof has been discovered yet she suspects her parents were a part of the battalion ordered by Phaedrus Lle'hileia to carry out genocide against the high elves. Faylen rarely goes into towns, she relies on herself to create or hunt anything she needs. Completely self-reliant, self-sufficient, and self-deprecating are a few ways this wood elf has been described by those who have crossed her path. When someone meets her by chance she will not be rude yet, not a talkative sort of company. She'll be polite, answer when asked a question but don't expect any long conversations until she has grown comfortable and accustomed to the acquaintances' presence. Appearance wise physical faces carry little weight, she wears her same outfit until it is too worn from much use or so filthy it needs a washing in the river. often mistaken for a human for her braids covering her pointed aural cartilage, she passes into whatever town of convenience and if they deiced she must depart, so be it. There are other towns that have what she needs. Her favorite season is the warmth of summers where the forest id in full spender with fertile grass and plenty of game for hunting.

 

Personality Traits: Introverted, Self-reliant, Polite, Animal lover, quite, enjoys sounds in nature

 

Ambitions: No long term goals prefers to forces on what could be done now

Strengths/Talents: Archery, Farming, Sword skills, Hunting

 

Weakness/Inability: Not fond of social interactions which could be a problem in asking for help. Likes to do works on her own which often leads to a bigger headache later on.

 

Appearance: Faylen is an average size for a wood elf standing at 5'8'' tall and has long hazel brown hair with side braids that conceal her elf ears. Her clothes are stiched by someone of little skill aka herself and with washes in the river occasionally. She is 118 pounds.

 

skin: I apologize for it not being an in-game photo.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited April 18, 2016 by anormann101
Fixed the Meta-gaming definition and added in more sever lore

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Your application has been put on PENDING

 

What this simply means is your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

Firstly, your metagaming definition is slightly off. I request that you expand upon it. Please refer to the definition link if you need help; but do not copy/paste anything, plagiarism is not allowed.

 

Secondly, I would like to see more lore within your character's biography. This could be server locations (ie, Courland), server history (ie, the battle of the sands), certain dates (ie, Faylen was born in 1507), etc. Please refer to the Wiki for help, it details tons of lore.

 

If you desire help or need me to review your app, please send me a PM over the forums- or feel free to add me on skype (thomascovey1181).

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

 

Your Application has sadly been DENIED!

 

This app is so close to acceptance, however I feel a few changes could be made. Let me just walk you through a few suggestions so the next app you post will be worthy of acceptance!

 

The player failed to update their PENDING application. Please fix the issues stated above and repost your app in 12 hours.

 

 

If you need any help whatsoever, I am a message away. Please, feel free to message me on the forums any time and I will help you with whatever you're having trouble with. I wish you the best of luck in your next application, Anormann.

 

 

 

You can re-apply in 12 Hours from the time of this denial.

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.