application [Denied] My newest Application

[Skaii 0]

Hello,so this is my third application and I  copied my other one and made some changes

 

 

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your MinecraftACCOUNT name?:xSkaii_

How old are you?:I am 11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes I am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The rule were I agree the most is: "If your a thief and kill someone who has there life savings with them,you need to give them a portion of it.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No,I understand them and completely agree

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found it on a Server Roleplay List

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):I applied for thousands of Whitelist Applications,but I have never been lucky enough to be accepted.

 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying : You play out a character or thing (like a animal) and act out a other behavior

What is metagaming?:Any action type of game

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Style of interacting with games-like systems (Like , for example, a NPC)

 

In-Character Information
 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Alrye

Character’s sex: (male or female?)female

Character’s race: High Elf

Character’s age: (upon application , your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)Never knew her Mom and dad,but she was raised by her Older sister,after the war at one of the Minor Realms (The Verge) (Where the Older Sister Lived) she ran away,while traveling to 5 realms Athera,Anthos,Asulon,Aegis and Elysium.After that she found Vailor,worked for life savings nd made a new self for her.She still never knew where she was born,but just hopes that she can find her mom and dad.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)Nice,Mysterious,skilled at archery,strange,training to fight and do magic.

habits:fighting,archery and half of magic

 

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)To be a guard

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)Archery

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)Magic

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)Orange hair,White top,black jacket,brown ripped jeans,elf ears,average height of a high elf

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) Sorry if I messed up the skin part (I just uploaded a download/image)

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your power-emoting definition is plagiarised. You have been warned about this previously and since you have not paid attention to such warn, you will be banned for 1 week from applying.

 

• Your metagaming definition is incorrect. Look at the link below for some help but remember to put it into your own words when next applying.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

 

• Your biography is too short. Please expand upon it and make it the size of two decent paragraphs.

 

• Since your character is 19, they would have been born in Vailor (the current world) and would not have seen or been to any of the previous realms. I suggest that you read the wiki more to get a firm grasp upon the server lore.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

 

• You cannot apply with your character knowing magic. Magic is something that you can only obtain through being a whitelisted player on the server and roleplaying. Please remove all references of your character knowing magic.

 

• Your skin is not appropriate for the server as it is too modern and so does not fit into the theme of Lord of the Craft. Please find one that does.

 

You may re-apply in 1 week.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me.

[Chamosial 379]

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