[Denied] Note Mark

[[ToKi] Note 1]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: NoteKlix

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No cyberbullying and cyberbullies will be punished.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Do I have to have multiple characters? Can someone kill my character without my permission?
Also this appeal would add in some elf lore. If you don't want that added I can remove it.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a 100% Roleplay server..

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): None.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Pretending to be another charecter or be living another life usually in a game.

What is metagaming?: Breaking the 4th wall while role-playing or making different decisions with your charecter using information your charecter shouldn't know.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Dictating what happens to another charector without the owner of that charectors permission.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Note Mark

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Awoken, or elf.

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Born in Sancuary. Ancestor of Iatrilemar. Distant relative to Prince Tristan Tresary. Lived with parents Caroli Lost and Malguf Mark in a small village.
  Everyone knew the family and respected them and Note .The child attended school and was taught the history of the realm like anyone else until he was 10. He fell asleep one night and woke up not finding his parents anywhere. Note searched the town and asked everyone but no one seemed to remember who he was or know who his parents were. He gave up hope and started crying alongside a bar when a tall elf in a purple cloak said to follow him. Lost and with broken emotions he followed the man into the forest to an old shack. After he entered the shack it became apparent it was not his. There was another man with a sword ready for them. Note quickly realized what was happening and looked to the cloaked man for help, yet he was gone. Note was locked in a room and cried himself to sleep. When he woke up the door was unlocked and halfway opened. He exited the room to the horrific sight of the corpse of the man who had locked him up. There was a purple crown sitting on the dead mans chest with a note on it that said: "For Note". As Note donned the crown he felt empowered. After that he fled to the forest knowing he had no life else ware.
  10 Years later after barely surviving the constant Amber Wolf attacks Note woke up one night to see the cloaked man again. Note followed him without saying a word- until he fell into a pool of water that appeared out of nowhere. He cried for help but felt like he couldn't move. He slowly sank to the bottom losing air, he heard a whisper in his ear saying: "You are the true king" then everything went black. When he woke up it was still night, and the sun was rising. He was beside the pol he had fallen in to. It was just a couple inches deep. As he stood up he saw a reflection in the pool and froze. His eyes were glowing yellow. He felt awoken.
  Note pondered his next move for months, with not one amber wolf attack, until he came up with a conclusion. He would find out what it took to become a true king, and he would do it. His first step was to research elf history. He traveled to Fi'Ceru on foot until he finally made it. Every day he went to the library and researched. He would ask historians about lore and new ideas, until he heard about a story that struck home with him. there was a rumor about a separate race of elves, called awoken, that had more power and much more potential. The story went that at one point in time, true darkness pierced the atmosphere and landed in an elf. This elf had 2 children, a boy and a girl. The boy started the cult of dark elf magic. Everyone knew about this. But the girl disappeared at the age of 5. Note had to find out what happened to her.
  Note spent years, traveling from town to town, and going through warzones just to find a new lead. At the age of 23 he had just about given up. Every time he heard a new elder say they knew someone who might know something it would be a false clue, or the person would have been killed long ago. He finally was able to find someone though. An old gypsy. He had heard about her from an innkeeper. As he rushed to and into her hut, and asked her about the sister, Note realized the gyspy was dead. He cursed himself and was about to walk out when he saw a note on a desk. he observed it and it said: "You are looking in all the wrong places. Stay still and I will find you." A week later note woke up from a nightmare to see the purple cloaked figure watching him. He asked it: "Who are you?" The figure simply took of the hood. Note was surprised. Not only was the figure a girl, but it was beautiful. "I am the sister you have searched for. Ask any questions now." Note asked her many things and learned many things. He learned how to reach his full magical potential. He found about elf history and who the awoken were. The brother had only started a belief and died, Mara, the girl, had offspring. A new race of elven darkness mixed with human light. This race wasn't different from any other though. It was like any other elf. in order for an awoken to become unique it had to wash itself in a special water. After that it would lose its long elf ears, become stronger, get more magical potential, and would get glowing eyes. We are the only two real awoken. Mara said. No one else I know of can become awoken. You can only be cleaned within a couple years of coming to age for the process to be successful. We are the only 2 alive. You must find a queen. thus began his quest. To find his Queen.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) This character has sarcastic humor, is looking for a queen, is unique, and nibbles on his fingernails. He likes to have fun. He is chill and very blank to new people. He doesn't like tall dwarves. He also dislikes archers.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Find a queen.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Axe combat, and magic. Note is stealthy, strong, has enhanced elven powers, such as living longer lifespan, being stronger, slightly regenerative powers, and can also use google translate. (The last one is a joke btw)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) This characters weakness is bright, bright, light. It negates his magic.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)
6' 4"
Brown Hair
Pale Blue Skin
Purple & Black Clothing
Yellow Glowing Eyes
Black Cape With Intricate Design
Made this myself:
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Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)
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I have C4D

[jamesb 218]

 

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

To answer your questions:

 

No, you do not need multiple characters.

 

Yes, someone can kill your character without your permission, given that they role-play it properly. After your character is "killed", they will revive in the Cloud Temple, with no memory of the situation leading up to their death.

However, perma-kills, or PKs, cannot be forced upon you. This is when a character dies, and never revives. However, if you choose to PK your character(which you may do at any time), they cannot be revived.

 

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Your character cannot be the ancestor/relative of existing characters on Lord of the Craft. These characters would need to consent to you playing their relative.

 

- There is no actual lore supporting many of the things in your application(Awoken, magic pools of water, disappearing cloaked women.) You also cannot apply as a character with special advantages such as: magic, nobility, special race, etc. Because of this, I suggest revamping your biography.

 

- 24 is rather young for an elf. I suggest making them older.

 

- You cannot have yellow glowing eyes. This ties into my earlier suggestion.

Good luck on your next application!

 

 

[jamesb 218]

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