[Denied] Gregory Aerodyck - LOTC Application

[TheCynicalOne 3]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: OculusDrift

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You may not have an overpowered character. For example, your character cannot easily take down four opponents at once.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was searching for a Minecraft roleplay server on youtube and LOTC happened to be the second result

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

What is roleplaying?: The act of immersing yourself into a fictional or non-fictional character that isn't yourself

What is metagaming?: Out of character actions being implemented by the character

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Extreme progression of a certain area

 

Character’s name: Gregory Aerodyck

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Dark Elf

Character’s age: 243

Biography: His name is Gregory Aerodyck and he was born in the year 1529. He hails from the city of Dark Elves, Vivec. He was a mistake, as his mother was the one of the town whores and was soon impregnated by an unknown elf behind one of the local taverns. Soon after conceiving Gregory, his mother realized that she could not make enough coin to support the both of them and had him dropped on the doorstep of the orphanage. There, Gregory grew to become a charming, yet devious lad. At the age of 10, Gregory picked up the art of pick pocketing . After a few attempts, he was caught by the Vivec guards and was give the choice of having his fingers cut off or spending the next 6 years in prison. Naturally, he chose prison.

 

  For the next 6 years, Gregory was put through hell in the gallows. But before his sentence was completed, he hatched an escape plan. He had broken out of his shallow prison cell and plan to head towards Sutica in order to pursue his goals. Along the way , he slept in abandoned barns and ate from the troughs of swine. Desperate and alone, he happened to stumble upon Sutica, where he started his new life as a low class theif.

Personality Traits: Gregory is a habitual thief and a pathological liar

Ambitions: To become the king of theives

Strengths/Talents: He's with ranged weapons and has little skill with close ranged combat.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Gregory's tracking skills are not the best

Appearance: Light purplish skin tone with hazel eyes; 5'2?; Silverish hair?; none)

Skin: https://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http%3A%2F%2Flh3.googleusercontent.com%2FLvuV3JUvBj9ECQ5cIpsjU48iI0iuZ0D85umurwAXAF57RuWauzs1JPiGa8k54lZjdBPtnrAyeYWEKzD8Au8%3Ds400&imgrefurl=http%3A%2F%2Fminecraft.novaskin.me%2Fgallery%2Ftag%2Felf&docid=RKkSfPe8ap_K9M&tbnid=vssvcB5peyn1-M%3A&w=199&h=323&bih=799&biw=1600&ved=0ahUKEwjZt4L7zsbMAhWDOCYKHaJlAA4QMwgeKAEwAQ&iact=mrc&uact=8

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your metagaming definition is vague. Please expand upon it. Look at the link below for some help but remember to put it into your own words.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

 

• Your power-emoting definition is incorrect. Please fix this. Look at the link below for some help but remember to put it into your own words.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

 

• Your biography does not contain enough server lore. Please include at least three references to lore within your biography. Look at the links below for some help with this.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

• Being 243, your character would not have been born in 1529 as the current year in-game is 1558. Your character would have been born in Aegis and then moved to the other realms until reaching Vailor which is where we are now. Below are links for each realm and the order that they came in to help you with writing your biography.

Aegis

Asulon

Anthos

Athera

Vailor

 

• It is unlikely that guards would arrest a 10 year old child. Either make your character older when this happened or remove it from your biography.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me.

 

 

[Chamosial 379]

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