[Denied] My 1st Application to LOTC! :D

[Wasted Time 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: WastedTime

How old are you?: I would rather not put that out there :-)

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am aware of that.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I sure have.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Hostile and Toxic behavior, directed any anyone or on any medium, will not be tolerated, because I (and probably others) don't want to be bullied of some sort.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope I think I understand every rule here.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: By two friends, Dewlox and Nightcore_boy98.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you act as you are another person. As having a role in a movie but without script.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you use OOC information IRP to get advantages.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: It is when you do something too powerful, example: *I kill you with one stab* without giving the other one a chance to do anything.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Orlando Bloom/ Legolas

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) High Elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) OVER NINE THOUSAAAAANNNNNDDDDD

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

Bloom was born in 1977 in Canterbury, Kent, and was named after the 16th century composer Orlando Gibbons.[3][4] He has an older sister, Samantha Bloom.[5]

Orlando initially believed that his biological father was his mother's husband, the Jewish South African-born anti-Apartheid novelistHarry Saul Bloom (1913–81), who died when Bloom was four years old. However, when he was 13 (nine years after Harry's death), Bloom's mother revealed to him that his biological father was actually Colin Stone, his mother's partner and family friend.[6][7][8] Stone, the principal of the Concorde International language school,[9] became Orlando Bloom's legal guardian after Harry Bloom's death.[8]

Bloom's mother, Sonia Constance Josephine (née Copeland), was born at Calcutta, India, the daughter of Francis John Copeland, a physician and surgeon, and Betty Constance Josephine (née Walker). Through her, Bloom is a cousin of photographer Sebastian Copeland.[10] Bloom's mother's family lived in Tasmania (Australia), Japan, and India, and were of English descent, some of them having originally come from Kent.[6]

Bloom was raised in the Church of England.[11] He attended St Peter's Methodist Primary School,[12] then the King's School and St Edmund's School in Canterbury. Bloom was discovered to be dyslexic,[8][13] and was encouraged by his mother to take art and drama classes.[8] In 1993, he moved to London to follow a two-year A Level course in Drama, Photography and Sculpture at Fine Arts College, Hampstead. He then joined the National Youth Theatre, spending two seasons there and earning a scholarship to train at the British American Drama Academy.[14] Bloom began acting professionally with television roles in episodes of Casualty and Midsomer Murders,[8] and subsequently made his film debut in Wilde (1997), opposite Stephen Fry, before entering the Guildhall School of Music and Drama in London, where he studied acting.

Career[edit]

Bloom at the Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Man's Chest London premiere, July 2006

Bloom's first appearance on the screen was in a small role, as a rent boy, in the 1997 film Wilde. Two days after graduating from Guildhall in 1999,[1]he was cast in his first major role, playing Legolas in The Lord of the Rings film trilogy (2001–2003).[14] He had originally auditioned for the part of Faramir, who does not appear until the second movie, but the director, Peter Jackson, cast him as Legolas instead. While shooting a scene, he broke a rib after falling off a horse, but eventually recovered and continued shooting.[15] At the same time, Bloom also played a brief role in Ridley Scott's war film Black Hawk Down as PFC. Todd Blackburn. In 2002, he was chosen as one of the Teen People "25 Hottest Stars Under 25" and was named People's hottest Hollywood bachelor in the magazine's 2004 list.[14] All members of the cast of the Rings films were nominated for Best Ensemble Acting at the Screen Actors Guild Awards for three years in a row, finally winning in 2003 for the third film, The Lord of the Rings: The Return of the King. Bloom has also won other awards, including European Film Awards, Hollywood Festival Award, Empire Awards and Teen Choice Awards, and has been nominated for many others. Most of Bloom's box office successes have been as part of an ensemble cast.[16]

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) He loves to read, act and do stuff like that.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) All of his Ambitions are completed. His previous ambition was to be the best and well known actor.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) He's good at fighting, shooting arrows, acting, reading books, trolling, being amazing, being cooler than the person reviewing this application.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Nothing, he has the perfect body that gets the ladies going

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) He has white long hair, a beautiful six pack, perhaps it could even be a twelve pack...perhaps even a twenty four pack?

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) *insert Legolas skin here*

dank memes bruh

[Harri 4815]

Under review.

[Harri 4815]

Denied.

• Your meta-gaming definition is plagiarised off of another player's application. 
• Your power-gaming definition is plagiarised off of another player's application too.
• Plagiarism isn't tolerated, and repeating the offence will land you a ban of up to three weeks from applying.
• You can't be called Orlando Bloom or Legolas - those are two names that exist in media, so it's quite obvious why you can't be them.
• Your name realistically won't be two different names.
• Elves die off at about 1000 years old. 9000 thousand is absurd.
• Memes are banned here on LoTC. Over 9000 is also a dated meme, making it a double offence.
• The year currently on LoTC is about 1550 - thus, the 1900s and forward haven't occurred yet.
• Canterbury and Kent are IRL places that don't exist here on LoTC. Thus, you may not use them.
• Judaism isn't a religion here on LoTC, despite what some might tell you, so it may not be used.
• South Africa doesn't exist on LoTC.
• The apartheid hasn't happened here either, despite what some might tell you.
• Concorde language school doesn't exist here - or really any schools for that matter.
• India and all towns relating to it don't exist here on LoTC. We have completely different geography to IRL.
• Photography is not a suitable profession, as cameras are beyond the current technological era that players have at their disposal in game.
• Once again, Australia and Japan don't exist on LoTC due to having different geography to IRL.
• English isn't a language, as England doesn't exist - it's referred to as common.
• All the schools, academies and places you mention next don't exist, so they're not usable.
• Television is once more beyond the current technological era, so you couldn't star on either of the shows.
• All the movies you list next, as good as they might've been, didn't exist due to films not being possible to create yet.
• Magazines aren't a thing really here on LoTC - there's no regular ones, making that another lore flaw.
• All the awards don't exist here on LoTC - sadly you couldn't have won them.
• Your strengths seem to be slightly more powerful than your weaknesses. There's a little imbalance.
• Anonymous memers can't be cooler than me, so that strength is in fact a flaw. 
• Trolling isn't a suitable IC trait, as it shouldn't exist - despite what you may see or hear from others.
• Your weaknesses are a little bit lacking - I'm struggling to put my finger on why. Add maybe one or two small ones in.
• As impressive as a twenty four pack is, I'm not sure you'd be able to achieve that. Sadly.
• You need to actually have a skin for me to judge. And try to avoid Legolas ones. Please.
• Plagiarism is an offence, I'll remind you once more - due to you having copied the entire bio from Orlando Bloom's wikipedia page.
• Memes are banned here on LoTC. Ik, it's sad :(

 

A really good try! You nearly made it, there's only a few mistakes that I listed above. Feel free to PM me for any help on the application if you want to try apply again!

[Harri 4815]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.