[✗] BnmEmblem's application

[brendanmatta 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: BnmEmblem

How old are you?: 15

What timezone are you in?:NA eastern

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): i am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: moderator verdicts are final

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I searched for minecraft's number 1 ropeplay server

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): first application

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): I have logged in as a spirit and walked around yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: roleplaying is to act or merge into a completely different person and add on or continue his/her story as you go along

What is metagaming?: to affect the game or go beyond limits that have been set

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: is to force an action onto another player without consent

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Velkyn Dyrr

Character’s sex: (male or female?) male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) dark elves

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 1002

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Born in Asulon years before the Mori'Quessir enslaved the darkelves. Just when things were getting worst a new leader rose Khel Oussana who brought a new religion with him. he fought the moon worshippers and their leader Lord Gorgoth. I fought along side khel until he became the prince of Malinor then we parted ways, I made my way for the hidden cave system under the high elven city. At this time i was trying to avoid war at all costs but little did i know the war was coming towards me. After living in peace for a few years the High elves and the Wood elves started a war against each other and that's when i made a choice, follow Dak'ir or avoid war. So I fled to Kalos in the Minor Realms there i was able to become an apprentice to a blacksmith and i could continue my training. After becoming a blacksmith i went to continue my work in Vailor and met an old elven druid who held the portal to Aethermoore.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) likes to train with bows, crafting weapons to fit his needs, and wearing different jewelry to show others his accomplishments. dislikes most high elves and those who do not believe in ancestry.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Velkyn Aspires to be one of the few to lead the dark elves

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) with intellect, strategic thinking, and fierce combat skills he is able to out think foes in battle before they have the chance to see what has happened.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) most dark elves think before they go to war but not velkyn he makes decisions as he goes along which could very well become his downfall

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Red eyes, height is 5'8", dark grey skin, white hair, has a hidden war scar on his back (sounds like the witcher .-.)

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Remyy 952]

Under Review

[Remyy 952]

                       Denied

Sadly your application has been denied for the reason(s) down below. You may reapply in 24 hours.

 

  .    Your biography is much too short, you will need at least a decent two sized paragraphs. If you have trouble with this consider adding more lore, and experiences through your chars life.

  .  Your character is thought to be 1002, and born in Asulon. This is incorrect as from the present date of 1567 is roughly 225 years since Asulon. Keep in mind most Elves do not live long enough to exceeded their age limit, and that the age 50 is a adult.

  .  Some lore in your biography is incorrect; "Khel Ossuna who brought a new religion with him, she fought the Moon Worshiper-"

Khel was actually a high key Moon Worshiper, and the two religions clashed together, but no violence or war never broke out between the groups.

 

          You may reapply in 24 hours.

           PM me with any questions/concerns.

[Remyy 952]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.