[✗] application

[DoomedDM 20]

Irl information

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:  Robwar80

How old are you?:  14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware that the server is PG-13

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I like the rule that you shouldn't curse people because if there is cursing than you won't have a pleasent time while playing the game and you ruin it for others

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?  I understand them and I understand that the rules are to keep the game fun

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:  I saw it on youtube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):I have logged in.  I have logged in multiple times

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is if you are playing a game in which you play as if you are a different person and then you need to act like that person even if that person is mad up.

What is metagaming?:  Metagaming is if you use things in irl to influence the game like paying irl money to gain a advantage in the game

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:  Powergaming is that for example you do a action to another person and he or she doesn't get a chanche to reply

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)  Eleria Goodspring

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human (heartlander)

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 18 years old

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

Eleria was born in the year 1558 In the holy Oren empire in the duchy of Savoy.

His father was a  blacksmith who made weaposn for the duke his soldiers and tools for the peasants to use on the land.

His mother was well his mother she did all the work in the household with the help of Elia and his sister.

Elia was and is a kind boy who liked to have friends but a lot of times he was too shy to make friends with other children

Though he did have few friends it were true friends and he and his friens hapilly played together without a worry.

But sadly good things never last.

In the year 1668 his mother started coughing but the family ignored it thinking it was just a temporary ilness

But over the year the coughing got worse and worse and worse and eventually she needed to stay in bed the whole time.

At her dead bed she asked Eleria's father to find love again and remember her but move on.

Then a few years later in the year 1670 my father found a new wife and Eleria and his sister thought that they would finally once again have a mother.

Unfortunatly she wasn't a mother she was a monster.

One day Eleria was walking in to the home and when he walked in he saw something horrible.

His little sister had fallen of the stairs and had a hole in her head.

He then called his father and new mother his mother was quickly there and reacted hystericly but something was wrong Elia saw she was hysteric but in her eyes he saw happines and he then got suspicious what really happened with his little sister.

Because of his sister's dead he began to work more and began to shut himself off to the world luckily his father saw what was happening to Eleria and helped him open up more

After that Eleria came back to the world and kept on playing and drinking with his friends but he didn't trust anyone as easily again.

Eleria finally left his home town when he was an alley and he was attacked by a thief luckily Eleria managed to defeat him and asked him why he outright attacked him and not just simply robb him.

The thief admitted he was hired by his steph mother to kill him.

Eleria was totally shocked that his stephmother had done that.

Then the great move came and he needed to move to a new island.

Whilst moving he hid from his stephmother and went on a ship hoping for a new future without any more betrayals.

Before he left he left a note at his father's bed saying : I love you Eleria.

Now he is on a new journey  in hope for a new home without any betreyals.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)

likes : talking , making weapons , music , helping and doing his duty

Habits : biting on his lip , moving a little bit when being bored , thinking about what could have happened

Dislikes : betraying people , people who betrayed others , criminals , unjust trials.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) he aspires to join a guild and help other people in the guild meanwhile  getting a slighty influencal position

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)  he is good at keeping up work and blacksmithing

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)  fighting and trusting people to easily

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Eleria is a man with light brown hair and blue eyes and most of the time wears a light brown shirt and light dark trousers

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

 

 

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

Greetings, Applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• The current year of the server is 1576, the dates you've used in your biography has exceeded this year. Please adjust the time of the events accordingly;
• Your biography is a gathering of random events, and explain little about your character. It's just a cluster of things that has happened to your character, lacking reason and sometimes even logic. Please write a solid, in-depth biography, linking all the events together to form a strict storyline;
• Personality traits is a section where applicants describe how their characters behave. Yours only includes his likes and dislikes, and a few habits. Please include actual personality traits in your application;
• Your strengths state that your character is "good at keeping up". What is he good at keeping up, exactly?;
• Your character's strengths, weaknesses are vague and one-dimensioned. The Application Team encourages applicants to develop their characters in more than one way. Also, do mind including traits that are beyond physicality. A few examples to this would be: having a short temper, being patient, et cetera. Also, perhaps some talents could fit well!
• Your application does not contain enough strengths and weaknesses. Please include at least 3 of each;
• Your application contains many grammatical and spelling errors. Please check your spelling of certain words after you're done with your application, or use a spell-checker;
• Your definition of metagaming is incorrect. You may use the thread, linked below, to learn more about the definitions. However, please do not copy and paste the definitions on your application, as it may result in a ban from applying.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

Please do not hesitate to contact me for any questions/concerns you have via the Forums PMs, accessible from my forum profile. Good luck! 

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.