[✗] Whitelist Application

[MisguidedRoyal 54]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Athena6592.

How old are you?: 13.

What timezone are you in?: AEST.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have read the rules and agree.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: 'Hack-clients, mods or texture packs that provide an advantage are completely disallowed.'

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Another player from a different server mentioned it in the chat.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A.

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting as a character, reacting how they would react and containing the same personality, abilities, etc. as them.

What is metagaming?: The use of info in RP that you're character wouldn't know.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: The act of forcing your own emotes onto another character.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Manon Glasteon

Character’s sex: Female.

Character’s race: High Elf.

Character’s age: Current age is 41.

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): MAIN EVENTS OF HER LIFE:

Manon Glasteon was born on the Winter Solstice in Lin'sulan. Amber colored eyes considered 'impure' among High Elves. Manon was born to Remist, a wealthy merchant among his kind and a Lesser Elf concubine named Amarantha. Remist, after seeing the child had eyes entirely the color of amber, he was disgusted. Remist sent Manon to a town north of Haelun'or at the age of three. She was dumped on the streets, only left with a satchel of bread and cheese, a flask of water and her own clothes. She roamed the town, being the strong-willed girl that she was, she kept surviving,- living and adapted to stealing, taking things easily. Though one night, in which she decided to go for a big steal, she got caught attempting to ****** a basket of roasted meats and fresh fruits. The owner was furious, holding a butcher knife in his hand and chasing her through the winding streets. Manon's lungs gave in, considering her underdeveloped body, she collapsed by a forest at the outskirts of the town near a river. The owner took his time carving thick slashes through her flesh on her back and leaving various slashes in different areas. He shattered a rib itself, throwing her into the river to let her drown. Manon stayed at the bottom of the river, slowly losing oxygen and dying from lack of blood loss. She was found half-dead on banks of the river by Akiva Harlon who presented her with a deal; go with him and train to be an assassin of the Assassin's Guild or send her back to her father and tell him what she'd become of. Reluctantly, she agreed. Akiva planned to use Manon as a weapon against his rival, Finn Whitethorn and changed her name to Elentiya Archeron. He brought Manon back with him to his guild in Lin'sulan.

Elentiya began to train under Akiva's eye and became one of the best assassins within Lin'sulan. She was chosen as the Heir to his guild and was known as 'Lady of Fire' from her fire (pyrokinesis). After years of training, Akiva finally sent her on her last mission- to kill Finn Whitethorn. The mission succeeded with much ease, killing Finn quickly and quietly. She went to sneak out of the mansion, happy with her good work only to be suddenly surrounded by guards. She was then tortured and brought to the mines in Malinor. On her first day, she was brutally whipped across her already scarred back and then rubbed salt into her wounds, leaving her in the mines to survive among the other workers. On the verge of her wounds being infected, she lay on the ground, her body too tired to move. Unexpectedly, a kind girl slipped wounded Elentiya a tin of salve. Before Elentiya can thank her, however, a group of guards raped and killed the girl. During her time in the mines, she lost a great deal of weight and her menstrual ceased. After a year or so, Elentiya became sick of the place, the only thing keeping her alive was reminding herself of her name. She struck her chains and ran for it, seeming to attempt for escape but in reality, only wanting to kill herself and take down as many guards as she could in the process.

A spark of hope gleams when she finds that at the entrance, the guards had shifted their rotations and the front wasn't guarded. She pumped her legs so hard, her whole body trembling with excitement and freedom when she emerged into the blinding daylight. Not wanting to be caught in her escape, she dropped her pic and ran like the wind and darted past a range of mountains even with her starving, tortured and weak body. The euphoria was enough for her to body to contain and when she ran past the magic runes where magic was allowed beyond, she shifted, turning into her secondary form in which she hadn't known she had, turning into a girl with flaming orange hair, golden eyes, black horns, elongated canines and sharp talons. Though she'd barely noticed until she ran into a nearby town, everyone staring at her shredded, ragged clothing, smeared dirt across her face and bloodied appearance. She quickly backed out, changing into her normal form and took shelter at the outskirts of a forest. Elentiya lived in the town for a twenty years until she turned thirty-two. She left the town, and ventured to Lin'sulan again, only to be greeted by Akiva instantly. Elentiya was so enraged that she sparred with him, enraged that he hadn't come to save her from the mines and she somehow ended him with a slash to the neck though she emerged very wounded, covered in slices and even a broken shoulder- which eventually healed due to advanced healing. She kept her name which Akiva gave her, despising her given name and family name. She now roams the world in search of her father, wanting to kill him.

Personality Traits: Manon is a humorous, and also curious and somewhat rebellious. She despises her own kind, thinking the world should be equal. She appears mysterious to most with her pockets always containing strange things like tiny jade sculptured animals, charcoal and small, ruby beaded toe rings. She is a brave though sarcastic young woman who feels betrayed by her kin and everyone she meets because of her history. She dreams about a world full of starlight and dancing and art, peace, kindness and equality. Manon can be savage, cold and strange at times, as she feels shattered on the inside. She's very stubborn and keeps her promises, although she is quite a natural at lying. She has fiery, daring side to her that hates rules. Manon can be very seductive when need be but generally remains cunning and cool to most. She has unwavering loyalty to those who she trusts and a deep hatred to all of those who have broken it. In all, she has a dark side she doesn't mind showing, driven forward by her compassion, determination, self-sacrificing nature and faith for those she loves. Manon is a keen artist although after the events of her history, she mostly can't bring herself to paint.

Ambitions: She currently has no aspirations, she only wants to slaughter her father and is looking for a reason to continue living.

Strengths/Talents: Manon has an affinity for the following things:

~Fire (Pyrokinesis).

Manon can control, manipulate and generate fire, an ability from her Glasteon heritage. She can shape her fire into many different things such as daggers, shields, and even a wolf. She is also able to set rivers alight.

~Darkness (Umbrakinesis).

Manon also has a small affinity for darkness magic which she inherited from her mother's line. Though she showed no use of the magic in her younger days, she can acquire it given the certain emotional trauma. 

~Healing.

She has advanced healing, a water affinity inherit from Amarantha's (mother)  line.

~Shape-shifting.

Manon received this from her father's line. She is able to shift into her Secondary form which is a girl with flaming orange hair, golden eyes, elongated canines, black horns, sharp talons and her pointed ears remain intact. Her strength, stamina, accuracy, agility and flexibility increases when she changes to this form but her mental state is often jumbled. If she practices enough, switching in and out of this form, she would be able to get her mental state sorted out.

~Thought Manipulation (Cogitokinesis).

Manon has a small affinity for Mind Control though she has never used this. Again, inheriting this from her mother. If enraged enough, she can spontaneously tap into other people's minds if the victim is weak enough.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

~Wind.

If Manon encounters wind made by another user which is at least mildly trained in wind, her fire can extinguish almost instantly.

~Her back.

If Manon were to have her back injured again, it'd be very painful for her seeing that she's been hurt there so many times. She is also very sensitive there so if one were to run their finger down a scar, she'd become a shuddering mess.

~Her shoulder.

Due to Akiva which had shattered her shoulder before, she constantly gets pain there whenever she uses a large amount of magic.

~Red paint.

Whenever greeted by the sight of red paint, Manon begins to hyperventilate. She despises anything that looks like blood and never kills for pleasure, only killing to save her loved ones (though she has none) in need be.

~Small enclosures.

If Manon is put in a small enclosure with nothing to distract her, she begins to panic and will burn anything and everything. Since her times in the mines, she cannot deal with small areas.

Appearance: Manon is a beautiful High Elf with long, golden blonde hair and eyes the color of dark amber eyes. She has a lean, firm, somewhat slender figure with enticing smooth curves. She has five main, long scars which run down her back, and various other ones all in different areas. She has a tattoo on the left side of her left foot saying, "A huntress with an artist's soul." and another tattoo on the back of her neck showing her star sign, a Leo and one underneath her right breast saying, "I'm going to rattle the stars." She is said to be devastatingly beautiful despite the marks all across her body and resembles much of her mother, Amarantha. She weighs roughly 122lb and her height is under average, at 5 foot 9. She looks like she is in her late teens at the age of 41. Her Secondary form makes her hair turn a fiery orange, her eyes golden, skin color like honey. She develops black horns (which are not meant to be there but are only appear because of her mother's heritage), elongated canines, sharp talons and she becomes 6 foot 3.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) 

[Remyy 952]

Under Review

[Remyy 952]

Denied

Sadly your application has been denied for the following reason(s) below, yet do not fret applicant as this does not keep you from joining forever. You may reapply in 24 hours,

• -There's no way that your character could be alive after given thick slashes on the back and have her ribs shattered, please elaborate more on how your character could've lived after that.
• In your biography, it states that your character joined a assassins guild when she was younger. Considering she would still be a child when this happened, she more than likely would not have become a best assassin.. or even at all! if she was to be spotted she would be killed immediately because of her eyes.
• If she was to somehow kill the target, she would more thank likely be killed on spot. And with that, Elves would not be trapped within the cave system to work laboriously.
• Rape is against the rules, no matter if it is backstory, or in game. If found in game this is a banable offence and will not be taken lightly, please do not include this within your biography.
• Your character.. can not have a second form, considering there is no lore on this creature. Whatever it is, it may not be used and would be considered powergaming, this should also be changed with the bloodline.
• Your application contains magic that is non existent, and even so magic is not allowed to be used in your application, or within the first week of your joining. Following this is her strengths/weaknesses, please in your next application alter these into more lore abiding positions.
• Please refresh yourself with the basic guidelines of the server, concerning several of the previous messages above.
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If you have any questions and or concerns please do not hesitate to send me a PM via going to my profile, and using the message button! You may reapply in 24 hours.

[Remyy 952]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.