[✗] [Pending] Application

[FlowerGirl716 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: FlowerGirl716

 

How old are you?: 13 almost 14

 

What timezone are you in?: Eastern

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I have looked at the general ways.

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The fact of having to have a skin that results in the theme of the server.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): None at all I completely understand them.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was scrolling trying to find good role-play servers and happened to come across Lord of the Craft.

 

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):I have never been on a public whitelisted server.

 

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is the act of a person representing or playing as someone else in a theme set by a specific audience or group.

 

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is changing the way a game is by itself so as if the role play of medieval times effected the way minecraft is itself it's more than just building.

 

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Powergaming is giving th game a background or story and going towards that specific storyline and match the goal the story is trying to get to you.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Eden Giovanni

 

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Female

 

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) I would love to be a meadow elf but with that not an option the next best thing would be an high elf.

 

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 25.

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) I come from the vast land of our fallen city Princedom of Malinor. I was born in the year 1546 where many historical events took place that I'm yet not able to contradict. I was born into a family of wood elves saying as that they all were very loving of nature. As I grew up I started to notice many things wrong with the elven empire. I soon began to tend to the sick whether it was an animal or human to help the city in its times of despair. I came to love the land I lived on and made sure nothing could harm it. My family thought of me as to adventurous  that I needed to become more down to earth. With that my love for travel and adventure grew stronger I traveled the land finding many unforgettable sites either amazing or gruesome. The small parts of the areas I could travel to were quite ablaze with stories. I heard many tales of the lands history and how it was created. With my new knowledge I came to the realization of just how much I wanted to learn more of the world. I went from village to village seeking information as in the besiege of the dwarves fort Rhewengrad. My mine drifted off to uncertain areas and stories I have heard and my quest if they were true. I have come to seek out a land known as the Isles of Vailor where I might learn more of my culture and of others. The village I have come to love now leaves me with guilt and heart ache for so of that reason I must leave to find my own destiny. I have trained many months for the dangers to come ahead my practice with a bow has become quite powerful. I fret that it may be to much to handle but I can not fear what lies ahead of me but what forth comes in the end. Its time for me to make my own story and it starts now. I shall travel and conquer new land helping those in need. My story will be far greater then those of warriors and kings but my story will be over ruled with glorious unbelievable information that I will one day look back upon to tell everyone. 

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Love of Travel and Nature, Loves to learn about history of the land, Is very fond of helping animals and flowers, Dislikes conflict and pessimists.

 

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Wants to be a traveler learning and conquering the land she loves and hopes to one day make a great discovery.

 

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Using a bow, helping the sick, animals or humans.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Better conflict with a sword.

 

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) White Hair, Long Ears, 5'3, Gren Eyes, Vines with flowers on arms, Leaf skirt and shirt

 

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/-3113727/

 

BTW I changed my name if possible to Eden Giovanni

[Remyy 952]

Under Review

[Remyy 952]

Pending

Your application has been put on PENDING, but do not fret as this only means you only need to make several changes to your application before you may be accepted! please make the changes below within 24 hours, or you will be denied.

• Greetings Flowergirl! your biography is much too short, please make it at least two paragraphs long with  at least three references to server lore! While it is not needed, if you want your character to be fascinated with the previous map of Vailor, perhaps you would want a younger character?
• You may not apply as a 'noble' or royalty, please change this in your name!
• Your weaknesses/strengths are a tad unbalanced and unexplained in the biography, could you explain why she is good with nature? perhaps she has a bad habit, or snarky attitude.
• Wood elves do not have wings, and have darker skin. Please adjust your skin and appearance to resemble the lore! If you have issues, feel free to look at the wiki.
• Here!

If you have any questions/concerns don't hesitate send me a PM!

Once these changes are complete send me a PM, and if you require help, I as well as any other AT will be sure to see to that! You have 24 hours to contact me, before you are denied.

 

[Remyy 952]

Denied

Sadly your application has been denied for the following reason(s) below, yet do not fret applicant as this does not keep you from joining forever. You may reapply in 24 hours,

• Your corrections are incorrect! please find a more 'realistic' skin, and change where your character was born!

If you have any questions and or concerns please do not hesitate to send me a PM via going to my profile, and using the message button! You may reapply in 24 hours.

 

[Remyy 952]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.