[✗] [Pending] Whitelist Applications

[Gray_hood8171 16]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Gray_hood8171

How old are you?: 17

What timezone are you in?: UTC

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: all the rules in community Conduct

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: looking at skins.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes

 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: roleplay is were you act as your persona would. roleplay is making a story as the main character.

What is metagaming?: using information that your persona dose not know to get ahead of others.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: powergaming is doing feets that your persona can not and saying like "I strike him in the head."

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Rurik

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Mountain Dwarf

Character’s age: 300

Biography: Was born in Urguan like most of his kin. Although not with his oun family. He was rased by a elder dwarf in the city of Kal'Agnar. The dwarf was called Eldern. He teached Rurik how to be a Dwarf. the way of the forge and blade. He also learned about runesmithing.

In Ruriks later year he started to explore the world, soon after Grand King Uldar Irongut was crowned. First to the lands of the man. Wall their he was attack by a group of knights from the Eighteen Years' War, and was on the verge of death. In-tell a beautiful lady came and healed him. He never learned her name, but he did learn the way of alchemy.

Personality Traits: a stubborn and ale lover dwarven warrior. He works at the forge for fun.

Ambitions: Legendary smith that can be relied on. And a warrior now through out the land.

Strengths/Talents: He is a superb black-smith and a great warrior. As well as a ok alchemist.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Is dreadful at carving wood into anything. He will only make a big mess.

Appearance: A broad shoulder, 5 feet tall, thick dark brown hair, with a large scars on the forehead, and a red tattoo on the left arm.

Skin:

[Parion 1130]

 

Hello applicant!

Your application is currently pending; this means you are going to need to make a few changes before you can be accepted. Though, don't fret since you've a chance to fix this.

 

• Your definitions for power-emoting, metagaming and roleplaying are either a little vague or incorrect. Have a look at our own definitions and see if you can expand and correct your answers. Remember to do this in your own words and not to plagiarise.
• We need to see at least three, accurate mentions of lore in your application. This can be as simple as mentioning the names of towns or referring to major historical events. The wiki and New Player Guide can provide lots of information that can help you out with this.
• There are some aspects to this biography that are somewhat cliché. I'd suggest removing scenarios such as his family being killed by a bandit to rectify this.
• Try expanding your traits/skills/weaknesses/etcetera. I typically advise producing one to two sentences for these responses since we really want to see you indicating some persona development.
• Your current skin is inaccessible for viewing. Please upload a visible screenshot.

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes required. If this is not seen to within the given time, your app will have to be denied.

If you have any questions or need further assistance, feel free to PM myself via the forums.

[Parion 1130]

Hello applicant. Unfortunately, we have had to deny your application because the requested adjustments were not applied to your application in the given frame of time.

 

Do not fret! Re-application is permitted in 24 hours.

 

Your submission should be up to scratch for acceptance if you use the advice formerly given.

If you have any further questions PM myself via the forums.

[Parion 1130]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.