[✗] [Pending] Application

[Tyreil 0]

Tyler452

13

Mountain (-7)

Yes, I am fully aware

I have Read And agreed to all the rules.

I agree the most tp the rule about Metagaming being banned

No, after reading the rules and punishments, I am fully clarified

Google

N/A

Yes, that is how I got the link to the application.

Roleplaying is creating, and acting as if you are a character, all while interacting with other characters

Metagaming is using information that you gain OOC (that your in game character would not know) while in character

Power-Emoting is forcing an action upon another character, for example, "I shot an arrow through your heart, killing you". Basically, forcing another character to do something without consent.

Tyreil

Male

Elf

65

     Tyreil was born and raised In the high elven city. he has never left and is eager to leave, weather it be to fight, or migrate.  Tyreil lived through The hunt, and saw the armies march through the streets of the city.  After four years, his mother left for war, and he helped his father in his alchemy work.  News came, his mother was killed in the Battle of Leyulin.  Ever since then, he  has been trying to join an army to fight for his mother. Over time, his father kept giving him jobs and distractions to keep him occupied, but to no avail. eventually Tyreil grew older, and older.  One day, Tyreil sold most of his things, and he used his money to buy a home.  He left his father and became an alchemist of his own. 

Kind, Joyful

Join an army

fighting with bows and Swords

Elves being killed, fighting without weapons

Blue eyes, pale skin, blonde hair, 6'3"

 

[Vaynth 3005]

Claimed.

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fret! This simply means your application is good, but just needs a few minor tweaks to make it better. Please make the following adjustments below in under 24 hours or face denial. No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! Once you have made the following adjustments be sure to let me know by messaging me via forums.

• Your application is rather hard to read with the questions removed. Please rectify the layout by including the original heading to each section of it.
   
• Your biography need to be at least 2 lengthy paragraphs. Please include more important events in your characters life which have molded them to be who they are today. (For this you will need the Wiki!) Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age. Be creative and let us know more about your character.
  
  If you have questions or are in need of my assistance, please contact me through the forums and I would be happy to help!

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fear! This is not the end! This simply means the requirements that were assigned to the application were not completely fulfilled. The following reasons will be listed below. You may reapply after 24 hours, if you apply sooner than 24 hours you will face denial. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.
 

• You did not make any adjustments or contact me about your application within the 24-hour time period.

[Vaynth 3005]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.