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DarkWolf2884

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Out of Character Information

What’s your Minecraft account name?: DarkWolf2884

What timezone are you in?: Central

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Excessive Trolling or use of Memes in roleplay are disallowed.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Server Listings

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

Definitions

Roleplay: Roleplay is when you take the role of your character that you decide to play, feeling their emotion and struggle during what they go through.

Metagaming: Is is the use of strategy or factors used to affect the game and goes beyond the limits set by the environment.

Power-emoting: This is the act in which one makes themselves invincible or unbeatable.

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Darek Wolff

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Dark Elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Darek Wolff was born during a war waging throughout his home of Axios. He was born on the day of may 15th on a full moon of the year 2002. He spent most of his childhood obeying his parents as he grew up in his small home. Around the age of 14 he decided he would disobey his parents and leave his home with his friends. He left his home and walked with his friends through the woods near his home. As he was returning home he watched in despair as his home disappeared in front of him with his parent inside calling his name. All that was left of his home was the crater in which he spent that night.

As the years passed he spent most of his time being a soldier for hire. He would become an assassin from the shadows killing off kings from far away lands who traveled to his town. One day when completing his mission of killing off a heavily guarded king he was getting into position to execute the king with his saber when he was spotted. One of the king's guards spotted him and rushed at him as he slammed Darek into a wall. As the guard was about to kill Darek the king stopped him and offered Darek all the riches he wanted just to leave him be. Darek agreed and this leads us to where we are now.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Likes to chill in trees. Angry. Likes: Swords, Knives. Dislikes: Most people

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) He does not aspire to be anybody or anything. He lives in the present never looking back and never thinking about the future.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Swordsman, Martial Arts, Staying in the shadows.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) His weakness is that he never thinks ahead. He relies on his instinct to keep him alive.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) 6ft, White hair with black tips, Red Eyes, Scar on neck from random accident.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) (Skin attached Below)

 

 

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Under Review.

 

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- Denied for having a vague and not quite correct metagaming definition.

- Including almost no server lore in your character biography.

- Your character biography doesn't make much sense and I'd like to see some elaboration on things such as why he became an assassin, why the king offered him all his riches for no clear reason, what happened to his family home, what he and his friends did when they ran off into the woods.

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

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