[✗] [Pending] Application of squidlypuff. (EDITED)

[squidlypuff 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: squidlypuff

What timezone are you in?: i live in amsterdam ( i thinks its central european time )

How old are you?: I'm 17

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: i actually have 2 that meta gaming and power gaming is not allowed

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend of mine after i said i'd love to do RP in mineceaft

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:Role playing is playing as an in game character that you've taught of 

What is metagaming?: Using you're out of character knowledge to benefit you're in game character's knowledge.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)? Saying for example " she shot an arrow up into the air wich than hit him in the knee making him unable to walk " cus than your opponent has no chance or time to react to that and that is just not fair

 

In-Character Information
My character is Daisy she is a human like woman who got cursed

Character’s name: Daisy

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Human(ish)

Character’s age: She is just over 20

Biography

my character was born in necropolis and travelled towards savinia

when at a night she sat down by the campfire she had made the next day she would travel the last bit of the distance to Savinia but first she made her camp ready and went to sleep

when she woke up in the middle of the night she felt strange like something was watching her and the felt more heavier like she had something on her back. as she made a little twirl she saw something orange-redish follow her she than realised that is was stuck on her and not following her as she now felt she had a tail she was confused and sat down on her bed . but as suddenly as she awoke she fell asleep. the next morning she made the last bit of distance towards Savinia as she walked towards the gate of the city she realised that everybody was looking at her she than heard the news of The conquest of the Dreadlands by the Holy Orenian empire. she had never heard of such an accomplishment she than lived in the town or quite a while not knowing what to do with her newly found curse and what is actually meant. as she went to the cafe after about a week she saw a man a quite handsome man she couldn't control herself and asked him is he would be her master she was shocked by herself and ran away before the man could even answer her question. as she ran away from the cafe she went to the tavern she was staying in. she packed her belongings and left the city.

 

she went to and old lodge a couple of kilometers away from Metz she stayed there for a while and almost every night she got a nightmare of her death it would be alone in the lodge she had to find a man she heard a voice say over and over. she knew she had to try again and when she got back to town this time in Metz she heard the news of the new crowned King Peter I of the Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska she was surprised at how fast time has flown by it has already been 2 years since she left Savinia she went toward the tavern to look for a room that she could rent as she went into the tavern a handsome looking man came out of the tavern and almost bumped into her she smiled and looked at him waiting for him to look back. when he did he got surprise attacked by Daisy's question for him to be her master he was shocked and didn't know what to respond as he than asked what she meant by that question she told all about her curse and how it had happend he than took her hand and went on a walk with her towards the cafe as they reached the cafe he told her that he would be her master and that he would love to help her find a way to break the curse and to even help her set up her own cafe is her curse finally gets broken

 

( i am sorry i couldn't fit 1 more reference of the lore i am deeply sorry )

 

 

 

Personality Traits: She is of course very loyal she is very active ( her master in this case will lose some extra sleep hours ) and she is loving if she helps her master she does it with passion and not because she has too and she sometimes get a really big urge to eat fish

Ambitions: she aspires to be free of her curse and to have her own cafe

Strengths/Talents: She is really good at cooking and doing little odd-jobs like getting lumber or going shopping for food

Weaknesses/Inabilities: her weakness is that she can't deny a request of her master if he ask her to for example go fetch wood she has to go get wood

Appearance: She is just 1.8 meters tall she has waving red hair that reaches till about her butt

 

 

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

Under review

--- Pending ---

 

Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reason(s):

- Placed on Pending because the following is not lore abiding. Please delete this part.

20 minutes ago, squidlypuff said:

has gotten a fox tail after she was cursed to always obey and search for a master is she doesn't have a master she will die of loneleyness ( she is like some sorta maid , in the skin she wears a maid outfit too ) like i said before she got cursed by a spectral being and now has to serve her master for eternity or until he master dies

- Also 1.5 meters is much too short for an adult female human.

- Also red eyes is an unnatural color for any human to have, please change this.

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You should not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- Denied for failing to properly edit your character biography to say that she never had a tail.

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

 

You can re apply in 12 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.