[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Anastasia's Application

[UnlovableLove 4]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: UnlovableLove

What timezone are you in?: CST

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Toxicity will not be tolerated. On the internet it is hard to avoid toxicity, and it is best that toxicity is met with a firm authority. Safe environments are needed in order to ensure happiness.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope!

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Planet Minecraft.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Assuming the role of character in which you interact through.

What is metagaming?: Using information outside of your character's life to use them as guidance.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: The act of any character performing something they realistically couldn't do.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Anastasia Lysor

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 24

(Deciding to redo Ana's lore ^-^)

Anastasia, born in a common family, was a girl filled with desire, ambitiousness, and liveliness. Her father, Brandon Lysor, was a farmer and her mother, Katerina Lysor, was a seamstress. Life was good for the Lysor family. They were able to maintain a fair living wage, and lived a happy life. That was until her parents died under mysterious circumstances, which still haunts Anastasia today. Anastasia believes her parents were killed by a mage wielding dark magic, for she remembers her father mentioning a mage he was dealing with. Her mother's aunt, Selyse Brighton took her in and cared for her until she was eighteen. Ana and Selyse loved each other, and it was hard for Anastasia to leave and find work to sustain herself. She remembered when she was young, she would watch her mother seam the most beautiful patterns and dresses. She decided to follow in her mother's footsteps and do the same.

 

Today, Anastasia lives in the lively city of Karlsburg. She has opened a shop in which she sells linens and sews dresses, gowns, and any clothing requested. Anastasia is a devout follower of the True Faith, and strives to uphold her faith in her daily life. Anastasia often remembers the sweet faces 0f her late parents, and mourns them. She was not present at their time of death, but she only wishes she knew if they suffered.

 

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Anastasia is a very happy person, she is sympathetic towards many and is very charitable. Anastasia has a habit to talk too much, she doesn't realize it but usually she is told when she does. Ana likes fashion very much. Being a seamstress, she is very interested in the latest styles and such. Ana dislikes rude people, and tends to butt heads with those who she finds to be rude.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Anastasia aspires to find peace with the death of parents through finding out how they died. Ana was close to her parents, and ever since they died Anastasia has felt her mortality more than ever.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Anastasia is extremely good at sewing. If you were to ask her to create a lace gown and have it done by the end of the day, you would have two lace gowns within several hours!

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Anastasia needs to work on her temper. As stated she can sometimes butt heads with rude people. Sometimes Anastasia doesn't know her place too well, and will take it upon herself to place herself where she should not.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Anastasia has blonde hair, fair skin, icy blue eyes, and an hourglass figure. Her hands are calloused from seaming all these years. She is 5'5, and is relatively thin.

Skin: https://gyazo.com/3c194c32d6ef673abaeac59d9b9a5b15

[Imi 425]

Under Review

[Imi 425]

PENDING:

 

This does not mean your application is denied, but rather needs some editing!

 

1) Your definitions are somewhat lacking. They seem to be half-correct, which is great, but need more explanation and depth!

 

2) Your character's back story doesn't fit in with Human lore. Lysor has never been a Noble House on the server, and does not fit in with the lore of the fall of Oren. Therefore, your character cannot have been a part of it in this way. That doesn't mean to say that you can't have your character be a Lysor! Just not as human nobility! 

 

3) Please include at least 3 pieces of lore. You currently have one, about the Holy Orenian Empire

 

4) Please expand on your character's weaknesses, and provide more depth on these!

 

You have 24 hours to make these changes. If you need any help or have any questions, feel free to message me!

 

[Imi 425]

Accepted! 

 

While your characters back story is slightly generic, the parents killed by an evil force that's often used, you have worked really hard on this application and it's a great read.

 

Thank you for your patience!

 

If you need any help or have any questions, feel free to contact me here on ingame on Imibee!

 

~Imi

[Imi 425]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

[Cordial__ 230]

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.