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What’s your Minecraft account name?: Pigs_Might_Fly

What timezone are you in?: PT

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13?: Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: "Harassment - obsessive, malicious or nefarious behavior directed toward another player will not be tolerated."

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: ultraviolet pixie when she told me she was leaving Atherys for this

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications: None

Have you logged into the server yet?: Yes


 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplay is when you assume the role of a fictional character in a game in this case minecraft

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game, or goes beyond the supposed limits or environment set by the game. Another definition refers to the game universe outside of the game itself

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: When a character does something unrealistic like eating an entire village, or flying

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: William Rudolf

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human Heartlander

Character’s age: 29

Biography: William Rudolf was born in the city of Aleksandria. His Mother had died in child birth, and his Father was a stone mason working for an elf friend in Haelun'or. . William was taught the arts and literature by his father and at a young age was introduced to the church of canon. At first he wasn't a fan but he then accepted it after the relentlessness of his father. At a young age William's father brought him to the masonry he owned to show him the fine art of stone masonry. William would start working at the masonry at the age of 15, he worked as his fathers assistant, until a wagon of stone slipped off the side of the road above him and fell onto William's Fathers head killing him. After the accident William would take care of his sister and brother. William took over the shop and began to make a small profit, nothing like the shop had seen in its glory days. William knew he had to move if he was going to make a greater profit. So William packed his things and took his siblings to St Karlsburg to work. His brother Daniel would die of disease on the way to the city, while his 12 year old sister, Laylika would be drown in the ocean. Distraught over the grief he moved back to Aleksandria to try to get a palace job. Even though he lost his family all those years ago he would work just as hard as he would under his father as a tribute to him. 

 

Personality Traits: William is usually happy and joyful always saying hello to those he passes, he loves to go to performances and listen and play music like the violin and piano

Ambitions: William wants to create a nation of the elves that dominates trade in all the world, has a powerful army, and is welcoming to all.

Strengths/Talents: He is a talented stonemason, he also is very talented in the area of music such as violin and piano as mentioned above

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Self conscious about his work and the job he is doing, he always feels as if he could work harder, he could do better. He is worried of what bad work would mean to his father, William does not wish want to dishonor his father.

Appearance: My skin is a noble with a black hat and black clothing along with gold lace decorating it.0.jpg.bfc434197b8cd6169e6e40712d1253e7.jpg

 

 

 

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Under review

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Pending:

 

Your app has been put on pending for the following reasons:

 

1) Your definitions need tweaking. Your definitions are only half correct, and need fleshing out a bit. Please expand on your definitions.

 

2)You only have two pieces of server lore in your bio. Please make sure you've included at least three pieces of lore. 

 

3)You need to add more detail to your character's personality, strengths, weakness, appearance and ambitions. Aim for a good few descriptive sentence. 

 

4) Did you make the skin or are you using one from online? If so, have you had permission from the owner? 

 

You have 24 hours to make these changes by editing this application. If you have any questions or need any help, feel free to contact me!

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Denied.

 

Your app has been denied for the following Reasons:

 

1)You plagierised your definitions from two websites on Google. It is important to write the defitnions in your own words in the future. 

 

Please wait 24 hours before reapplying. If you need any help or have any questions, feel free to contact me.

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This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.

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