[✔] [Pending] Windder's Application

[Windder 0]

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Windder

What timezone are you in?: EST

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: “Metagaming is disallowed in its entirety. Metagaming is the use of information in roleplay that your character does not know. An example would be rallying troops to aid a friend even though your character would have no way to know he's in trouble.”

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): N/A

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friends Gressy and Dan_The_Derp recommended me this server

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):  Yes

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: to impersonate and pretend to be someone else and play their role.

What is metagaming?: Using knowledge that a character shouldn’t know as a advantage.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: A person that is forcing another person into action or preventing them from responding to a situation.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Dunlor

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Orc

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 38

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

Originated from The War Uzg and born during Year 1573. Dunlor was forced to fight for the Siege of Krugmar on Year 1581. Dunlor fought during his youth ages, only to lose. His people were conquested and subjugated afterwards, making Dunlor feeling guilt.The lack of leadership and discipline enraged him so he wished to be a leader.

Dunlor ventured out into the wilderness and trained by himself as he wished he could've affected the war. Feasting on any source of food when his hunger was affecting his fighting abilities. He eventually came back on year 1590 when Krugmar was no longer enslaved and became an official warrior of the Uruk and enjoyed the battlecry of war. Arriving at San’Raahk to defend the Rex.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Confident but with quick-temper. Encouraging, Honorable with fighting but ignorant with words. Rude mouth

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) To be remembered as one of the most terrifying warrior and to be a wise leader.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?; Close combat and leadership

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Archery

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) A tall 6’3, Uruk orc with terrifying long tusks sticking out of and huge eyes including black pupils. Wields black braces on both his arms and legs as he wears dark red pants to match his rough green skin.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[z3m0s 1957]

Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reason(s):

- Your power-emoting definition is incorrect, please correct it. 

-You need to specify what military your character was sent to if sent way, because the uruk military would of been in the one place with you and all the other uruks.

-Vanishing without cause and returning often ends in being branded whitewash which is a fate far worse then a year of labour.

-You also have tusks, in your character appearance section you specify fangs which is top teeth, where uruks have their bottom teeth enlarged.

-please add more lore to your biography, you're close but just not cutting it.

-Overall a good application that with a little work will be accepted.

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You should not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[z3m0s 1957]

Your Application has been [ACCEPTED]

 

This application is accepted. On the behalf of the application team, we welcome you to the server as a whitelisted player. Please wait patiently;  an Application Team member will implement you to the server shortly! While you are waiting you are more than welcome to browse the forums and/or Wiki to refresh your mind on server events and lore.

 

[z3m0s 1957]

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.